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So i hawe relay much work in that translated text so bee gentle when comenting about it (i know it got many defects) :D ...
somthing to listen : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=865Ev5ZbIyE
this music kinda fits for me in this storry...
now i found a nother music (even better for the storry)- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ftvQ7dX1CSU
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Posted by SomeGuy1294 11 years ago Report
I like this quite a lot so far. Hope you continue it!
Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report
this time i will ... i know i got a lot of unfinished stuff that are waiting for the goal but now i told to myself i take this one to the end (i hawe already some pages but i still need to work on those and the text is the worst for me :D it took me longer than draw this page :D
Posted by Nekiame 11 years ago Report
Well, if you need help with the text, there is probably a lot of people here who'd happily help translating, among them me. I see the things that ended up wrong, yet understand what you meant to write( at least I hope I did.) Though, even with the minor mistakes in text, this is really awesome work. Keep it up^^
Posted by Assimilation 11 years ago Report
Honestly, all of the text mistakes add a lot of charm to it, matching how the art style is so rough and sketchy. It basically looks like it's intentionally supposed to be unpolished--a story drawn and written by a non-native anglophile, which happens to be exactly what it actually is.
I would be happier if the text never gets edited from the way it is right now.
Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report
thats an intresting point :)
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
Nice start... I'm liking the way this is going :D
Posted by Liz 11 years ago Report
Interesting indeed.
A good start <3
Posted by Flamewarproductions 11 years ago Report
I will be lurking, waiting for more. Keep up the good work big guy!
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
Let's gather 'round the campfire and sing our camping song!
Posted by Flamewarproductions 11 years ago Report
Our C-A-M-P-F-I-R-E-S-O-N-G song!
Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report
somthing for listening at the fire :D http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2nt0LgVaYgQ&list=FLlIg81c362Y-s45A6RQXE8g&index=1
Posted by BellyOfTheBitch 11 years ago Report
I can guess where this is going. Have to say, I love the premise
Posted by Justsomeone 11 years ago Report
You and me both
Posted by Rupie 11 years ago Report
this is really cute
Posted by bela 11 years ago Report
beautiful eyes
Posted by joeburp22181 11 years ago Report
Really cool Biggy!
Posted by epicprivate 11 years ago Report
This is what I feel about this comic...
http://prntscr.com/2c9kzc
Posted by AdjectiveNounCombo 11 years ago Report
I like life parodies like this. Might be inspired to do one myself. Really wanna see this develop! Get crackin on the next one.
Posted by Dudeox05 11 years ago Report
Looks interesting! Looking forward to seeing how this one develops. :3
Posted by NextBowlMovement 11 years ago Report
Awesome ^^
Posted by Maurt899 11 years ago Report
Hah... This is the story of my fiancée discovering my fetish! Seriously it's kinda weird! Except at the second to last frame, she started screaming at me... It was a bad night, but luckily she has accepted it now, though still not really comfortable...
Posted by oddhis 11 years ago Report
wow! If this girl looks like that in real life, then damn. You are lucky :D
Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report
naaaah this story and the charatcer is made by my crazy mind ... sadly :/
Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report
maind
Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report
:D mind :D ... wich one is the right word ? :D
Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report
Oh god! AWESOME!
Posted by Predman101 11 years ago Report
He ends up eating her,PLOT TWIST! XD
Posted by Sarus 11 years ago Report
I definitly like where this is going !
She looks pretty hot too :)
Posted by mjdc2505 11 years ago Report
I'm always impress with your art work, I damn near favored all of them.