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In a fashion reminiscent of harem manga, http://profile.aryion.com/profile/Denis is suddenly approached by numerous suitors with each their story to tell.
M/ffff + several in flashbacks.
(Thought of doing something with the harem genre, but with it being difficult to project in a single story I chose to do it in this manner. Oh and Non-graphic scat this time.)
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Posted by TheStatue 10 years ago Report
This was a good story. Felt a little sorry for the girls. Not the treacher though. Pedophilia is not cool. By the way, this is only a suggestion, but what if you did a stpry where Dennis or Alvin actually gets a crush on a girl and starts dating them? Then the other twin could eat the girl out of jealousy for the attention she was getting from the one she was dating, and the one she was dating gets angry at the one who ate her?
Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report
Thank you.
Note though there is a distinct difference between Pedophilia and Ephebophilia. The latter which the teachers had is attraction to teenagers, not little children.
As for the idea, it wouldn't really work out as it's not really in character for them to be having crushes on people due to their sheer chasteness.
Posted by TheStatue 10 years ago Report
I guess so. I wonder what they'll do when that agent finally contacts them? Will they listen to what she has to say, or eat her on the spot? Hmmm.
Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report
Depends on the manner of contact. The reoccuring character Ms. Bottoms for example is still around because she has managed to become a sort of constant in their lives - plenty helped by prior contact while they were conditioned for life in modern society.
Posted by noisekeeper 10 years ago Report
This was quite the enjoyable story!
I always wondered why the cliched harem genre was never used more often in fetish material. As you showed, you can use all the old tropes (a la Love Hina and the like) and use them, in this case, a vorish setting. And it works great of course, seeing a gaggle of blindly lovestruck girls get unwillingly eaten by the object of their affection. Many a harem anime would end quite fast if the MC just ate all the girls after him haha. Denis sure is lucky that there is an endless supply of girls in the world to snack on.
Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it.
I guess the difficulty in using the harem genre in fetish material has to do with it needing time to develop. While in fetish people often go straight to the action, so mixing them is tough.
Posted by vaatidorf6000 10 years ago Report
This is quite an interesting concept. Awesome story, Vir!
Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report
Thank you.
Posted by Blahblahbum 10 years ago Report
Always good to see more of the twins, but is the Mass Effect storyline done? I was so hoping to see more of my favorite sci-fi universe going down a certain Quarian's throat. Or, maybe even a new storyline showcasing one of the many lovely Asari character's visiting a beach somewhere on the Asari home world and downing a few "snacks".
Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report
Thanks.
As for the Mass Effect story, it's not done but I haven't gotten around to it yet.
Posted by Predman101 10 years ago Report
Loved the story!!! Your skills as a writer are getting better and better! Keep it up!
And I would have kept Janet, if I were Denis, in my opinion that is.
Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report
Thank you very much.
No chance to see Denis keep any girl outside his belly for very long though.