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MORE THRESH BECAUSE WHY NOT, I STOPPED CARING A LONG TIME AGO
Actually in all seriousness this is a thing I'm pretty proud of? It's a stupidly self-indulgent and ridiculously long piece of fucking fanfiction, and that's pretty gross, but I'm still very pleased with how it turned out, diction-wise. It also contains my weird-ass interpretation of how the process of having one's soul destroyed might feel from the prey's perspective, so there's that. Ouch.
Realize that I wrote this way before the lame stupid lore changes that made Summoners no longer canon. Even if I hadn't written it then, I would have still done it this way because I'm grumpy that Riot took away the concept of Summoners/users being able to interact with Champions. And by 'interact with them' I mean 'get killed by them'.
Oh yeah, you should probably have some warnings:
- M/F
- Soul vore
- Soul digestion
- Domination/submission
- Excruciating pain
- Horrible murder
- Blood everywhere
- Stuffing (well, with souls, anyway)
- Weird erotic overtones
- Semi-willing-unwilling prey
- Generally fucked-up bullshit
- FANCHARACTERS
- Ceru again because hell will freeze over before I use someone else
There, you were warned. This was one of those things I didn't originally want to post but finally decided to stop worrying about, so, y'know, don't judge my awful fantasies too hard. I know I like Thresh too much. I know.
Anyway, please enjoy my creepy writing! Or don't. ;>
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Posted by Sy0p 10 years ago Report
M/F isn't even usually my thing, but this was very entertaining nonetheless. Very thorough. Very detailed- you get a great idea of Ceru's mindset and, of course, Thresh's cruelty.
Well done.
Posted by Cerulesta 10 years ago Report
Thank you! I also must offer a second thanks that you actually read the entire thing, especially with M/F not being your preferred gender matchup. I really enjoy getting inside the heads of characters, be they my own or those of somebody else... and it pleases me greatly to hear that I've done well in terms of capturing their emotions and experiences. Especially when it comes to canon characters that aren't mine; I really try to make them accurate and do them justice wherever possible.
And yeah, I potentially went a little overboard with all the detail here, I worry... though I did admittedly write this for myself as sort of the culmination of all my Thresh-related feels and fangirling. So it is very self-indulgent, as I said. I'm happy that you didn't find it a bad thing. :'>
Posted by KinoTheCat 10 years ago Report
Oh my goodness.
I am happy to say that this was a story that reeled me in and made me /want/ to read every single detail of the story. This is quite possibly one of the bets crafted stories I've ever read on the portal. The way you portray both Thresh and Cerulesta makes you both love and hate everything going on.
By the end of the story I felt quite sad for Cerulesta because of how... tragic it all felt. Kind of like a bitter sweet love story.
I love this story, and am happy to say that I read it as a real, tragic story. One that could really fit into the world it comes from.
Very wonderfully done~ YOu should be proud of this story~ <3
Posted by Cerulesta 10 years ago Report
Oh wow, thank you, holy crap *_*; I wasn't really expecting anyone to be extremely engaged by this story like you described since it was written as more of a personal thing... let alone with how long it is.
For you to feel like the story is believable for the characters involved, and for it to instill those emotions in you... I guess that makes me feel extra good because I only actually own one of these characters? So for it to seem 'natural' and for you to tell me that it comes across like a real tragedy is such a huge compliment.
It was, of course, never meant to be a happy tale-- I don't think I've ever written a happy ending for Ceru, but this one was especially miserable for her since she actually had feelings for Thresh, even though they were really misplaced and he didn't return them in a way that could have been called anything but cruel. To me, I love putting her through terrible situations like this, though I worry that she'll seem like she was just thrown in, in a Mary-Sue-ish fashion, due to her being my 'avatar' of sorts. But I feel good as a writer to know that readers actually do feel bad for her and empathize with her plight; if that's the case, then hopefully she isn't a shallow character, and I must be doing something right.
Thanks again for your wonderful comments!
Posted by KinoTheCat 10 years ago Report
Honestly, I felt like the way you depicted Ceru in this story made her seem like someone who really fit within the world of Valeron (Is that the overworld name for League of Legends' lore? I don't remember. >~<). I felt like this was one of those 'extra' lore stories that have been showing up lately from the current events going on with league, and it truly gives more of an in depth connection and understanding as to how dangerous this is to a summoner.
Keeping on the aspect of connectivity between the two characters due to their having to be connected through summoning definitely makes Ceru feel like a young and frail summoner. I imagine her only having ever used Thresh, and for only a small amount of time. (did you mention six months of time for how long she used him in matches?)
She has flaws, and she isn't perfect, which is what keeps her from being a Mary-sue kind of character. :3 And well... I guess she's kind of nothing now considering... <3
Posted by Cerulesta 10 years ago Report
Yes, Valoran is the name of the world. And really, you actually think that? ;___; That's such an honor to hear...
And I don't recall that I mentioned a specific time frame that she had been partnering with Thresh for, other than 'months'. That implies that it's been less than a year, so no, she hadn't been at it for a very long time. And for the time that she HAD been doing it, she must have screwed up and picked Thresh fairly early on, growing infatuated with him and effectively sealing her fate. >v>;
I still worry about being Mary-Sue-ish, even though she does have flaws, because she's still an avatar for myself and she gets to interact with canon characters in a rather intimate manner-- even if it's mostly getting intimate with their insides, heh. But you may be right. She's definitely a pretty huge fuck-up. Her getting killed is the equivalent 'wish-fulfillment' for me that hooking up with a canon character might be for a normal fangirl, but I don't think many people out there would be envious of her fate... especially now that she essentially no longer exists in this story's universe. <3
Posted by KinoTheCat 10 years ago Report
Hehe, yeah I honestly think you've got nothing to worry about when it comes to Mary-sue-ish problems.
From what I've seen, Mary-Sue's tend to be 1 dimensional 'perfection' characters who have everything go their way and don't experience or deal with any flaws. (Or in shows, they deal with it for one episode and then it loses continuity -w-; )
Even with Ceru being your avatar, you give her traits that make her stand out on her own in a world that she feels like she used to fit in. :3
Posted by nephilim 10 years ago Report
I'll definitely read this later. I miss the sheer verbosity of your tormenting vore LOL
Posted by Cerulesta 10 years ago Report
Ahahahahah ;v; It does tend to get pretty out of hand sometimes... and this one's particularly tormenting, I'd have to say. I'm pleased that you're interested, and look forward to your reaction!
Posted by nephilim 10 years ago Report
I'm very excited. I daresay you were the only other person that wrote as grimly as I do LOL
Posted by nephilim 10 years ago Report
Deliciously grim and gruesome.
The detail is arresting. The prose is hauntingly beautiful. And the emotional charge is absolutely engrossing.
Your diction - as I have come to expect - is exquisite.
I also love your ability to paint your characters with such realism, treating them - and, by extension - their situations with incredible verisimilitude.
You are one of the exceedingly rare, few on this site that constructs behaviors and characters that come across as unrelentingly 'believable.'
Posted by Cerulesta 10 years ago Report
It's always so fantastic to get a comment from you on my writing. Especially considering that you're such an incredible writer yourself; it means that your words hold a lot of meaning.
I have to wonder exactly what it is that I do to make my characters believable, since multiple people have stated that. Perhaps it's just that I love trying to put myself in the characters' shoes and that I have some ridiculous obsession with describing their emotions, but I tend to write about distinctly fantasy-based scenarios, which I don't think would ordinarily lend themselves to that sort of thing.
Maybe I've spent a little too much time exploring the intricacies of Ceru's mind... eheh. But at least, because I'm so invested in her, I can write her well-- and while it may be tiresome for some people to read about the same character every time, I feel like using anyone else would sacrifice a lot of my engagement in the scenario as a writer. In other words, I doubt I'd get this result if I didn't include Ceru. So I have her to thank, for existing in my mind so that I can repeatedly put her through hell and learn exactly how she works. :'>
Thank you, though, for taking the time to read and remark on this. It actually means a lot to me that people do like this story, since I hadn't originally planned to post it in public. It helps prove to me that trying not to worry about what people think of my work is a very good thing to do.
Posted by divineBeast 10 years ago Report
whoa this was really detailed in the right ways! the ecstasy of the pred as he reveled in his binge and the digestion parts made me really happy!
Posted by Cerulesta 10 years ago Report
Thank you! <3
The reason parts like that were so detailed is, well, because I probably like them as much as you do. That, and I just like to type really gratuitous and unnecessary amounts of detail, but still. I'm glad you appreciate those parts because they were honestly some of my favorite parts to write out of the whole thing. ;v;
Posted by Avezola 10 years ago Report
Looks like a huge killingspree :0 damn thresh get it together u darn supporter!!
Great work Fine discriptions and creeeeeepy <3
Posted by Cerulesta 10 years ago Report
Hey, he can be an ADC if he wants to! >V>;
Sorry I didn't respond to your comment when you originally posted it, by the way! I think it must have eluded me somehow. I'm glad someone found it sufficiently creepy-- in a good way, I assume, or else you probably wouldn't have kept reading it. Thank you. <3
Posted by ebedk 10 years ago Report
I've come back to this story several times and each time I'm in awe at how well you capture feelings in writing... cruelty, dominance, submission, obedience, a battle between willingness and unwillingness. Anyway, I love it.
Posted by Cerulesta 10 years ago Report
Emotions are probably one of the most major driving forces in all of my art, be it visual or written. To have a medium through which I can pour my feelings out is the main reason I am an artist to begin with... so I put what I worry might be too much emphasis on them at times.
Comments like yours, though, make me feel like perhaps my extensive focus on emotions isn't remotely a bad thing-- so thank you for that. Writing stories like this, that are this emotionally charged, is always a joy for me, and it makes me feel proud when people praise that aspect because it means I can write what I love and still have other people love it, too. <3