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A Bid What You Will Commission for  max123

Four campers in a storm stumbled onto a gingerbread house. The woman there welcomes them to the "Candy House Hotel", yet the travelers have no idea what's in store.
Note: This is about twice as long as a BWYW commission usually will be. max123 just happened to win the "inspiration lottery" as I call it, and certain scenes inspired me to expand on them with enough of a bid that I didn't mind.

For information about BWYW Commissions go here: http://aryion.com/forum/blog/the_Wolf/bwyw_snippet_commissions_b-19752.html

Comment on BWYW: Candy House

the_Wolf: Comments are always appreciated, and I'm happy to hear if something I made got you off. :)
Actual, thoughtful critiques are also very welcome.
Petulant insults or rambling diatribes will be deleted and the offender blocked. There is no tolerance for stupid/rude.

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Redpod

Posted by Redpod 10 years ago Report

ncie digestino?=:P

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New

Posted by New 10 years ago Report

Hmm. Quite interesting indeed. Not really one for pregnant prey or brainwashing, but well-written.

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TW

Posted by TW 10 years ago Report

Nicely done. Good job on the changes in perspective.

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the_Wolf

Posted by the_Wolf 10 years ago Report

Thank you, glad you enjoyed those! I did have fun working with them. :)

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Hypnosnake

Posted by Hypnosnake 10 years ago Report

Nice touch with that reflection at the end.

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the_Wolf

Posted by the_Wolf 10 years ago Report

Thanks, hoped that would work for the story structure. Always nice to know someone likes those things.

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