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My previous story was fairly long and without much vore in it. So after that I decided to write a short and silly vore story. Which this is. Enjoy!
I was inspired mainly, I think, by Prinny' story "Ice Cream You Scream" (http://aryion.com/g4/view/206545 ), which in turn was inspired by writer IceCreamStand. I must also credit Voremantic, in particular for his short comic "Monique's vorcation" (http://voremantic.deviantart.com/gallery/48206019/Monique-s-Vorcation ).
Edit: Nalzindar has drawn a fantastic image of this story, here!
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Posted by Skittles209 10 years ago Report
That's cute. Stupid people once again though, sigh. Forgot who said "People are stupid mindless idiots, but a person is an intelligent individual... in some cases"
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
Well, to be fair to them, they'd always assumed that dragons don't exist. So most of the assumed he somehow wasn't real. And reacted accordingly, with curiosity.
Posted by Skittles209 10 years ago Report
And to be fair, he had the same rights for his actions.
Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
I realized that I haven't commented on this story yet, even though it is one of my favorite stories of yours. So I will correct it now.
I think this was a great story, quite descriptive and rather quick to the point. It was amusing how nonchalant Mandy was after the dragon snatched up one of the women and began devouring her. He must be a pain in the back to walk around with if he got this kind of habit. The conversations were also great, keeping it to the essentials and still manage to mix it with enough small-talk to make it "natural"
I must confess I am a bit curious where the girl and the dragon comes from, since she mentions the paperwork when somebody goes missing in this world.
And lastly, I wouldn't mind seeing more stories from this peculiar park in the future, if you should come up with more stories :3
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Thanks! Dragons do have a certain appeal, with their civilised refinement and their long sinuous neck that you can a swallowed person go down. And I enjoy the way Prinny, for example, writes dragons' polite talk towards their intended prey.
Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
Quite true, and I believe he is going to write another story about his highly polite dragon again soon!
And by the way, would you allow me to make an illustration of this story if I should find time to it?
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Of course. Feel free; I'd be delighted to see it!