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When competitive school sports meets vore a herm girl has to live with the consequences of losing.
The links go to manips made for the story!
Something I wrote for an upcoming game I'm making with Lady_List. It'll be another visual novel style one, but with a lot more effort than the one I already put out.
It was going to be one of the main character's backstorys but I went a different direction. I decided to go ahead and write it all out and explore my world and see where I wanted it to take me.
The game will be centering around one of the schools mentioned in the story :P
pics here since postimage dieded: https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=88&t=32934&start=180#p2267878
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Posted by ironman362 9 years ago Report
I really love the integration of the photo manips :)
Posted by ryanshowseason3 9 years ago Report
Thanks! Means a lot. I feel like I'm still looking for the next thing to do. Shoving the images into the story really just broke the flow of reading up. Linking to them with specific sentences felt a lot smoother, although I don't think I utilized it quite as well as I could have.
Posted by GrinningCheshire 9 years ago Report
I love stories where who gets vored is decided by competition! So I really liked this one.
Though, I agree with the mom. I wish I could have been there to help get her daughter out! *I love me some Futa cream!*
Posted by ryanshowseason3 9 years ago Report
I'm incredibly partial to bets or games of chance too, anything where there is a certain moment when the prey *knows* they're done for.
I liked putting that in, it was actually kind of my writer regret seeping into the character. I knew I wanted a mother to get told her daughter was dead and for her to be non-plussed over it. To show how casual I wanted vore to be. But then I thought "Well shit there's a missed opportunity! She could have been so casual about it that she'd offer to suck out her own daughter"
But I wasn't about to go back and rewrite the scene...
Hence the mother's regret mirroring my own.
Posted by BaronBuffalo 9 years ago Report
Wait, wait... ANOTHER GAME!?!?!?! YEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSS!
Posted by ryanshowseason3 9 years ago Report
Don't get too excited. This one is on a whole other level. In quality and effort as well as...
Artists don't draw for nothing so this one is actually going to likely cost money, especially since I'll be licensing audio as well.
There will be a free demo though. Which will serve as both an offering to the community and an excuse not to run tech support. If the demo don't work, don't buy it!
None of this means my current free game is out of the picture rest assured. I am actively developing content for both.
Posted by ZRex030 9 years ago Report
You missed a great "Track Meat" pun!
Posted by AngelofHell64 9 years ago Report
Agreed, I reread the title every time thinking that pun had been made, but am saddened to see it wasn't
Posted by ryanshowseason3 9 years ago Report
Thanks! So far I think this one is one of my favorites too that I've uploaded.
Posted by SenpaiVore 9 years ago Report
I like to imagine they don't make it ^///^
Posted by ArtaxIsSleeping 7 years ago Report
Don't suppose you still have the manips? The links in the story are all dead.
Posted by ryanshowseason3 7 years ago Report
This might be the one story I didn't put the images into my photo manip thread. I can't seem to find them there.
I'll check my hard drive but it's not looking good... I'm kind of confused as to where they went...
Posted by ryanshowseason3 7 years ago Report
Yah I really don't know where these went or which images they were. I can find a bunch of pics for other stories but seemingly not this one. woops. I need to organize better going forward.
Posted by HyperlinkError 6 years ago Report
still a great wank
Posted by Fiaura54 5 years ago Report
Many of your pictures aren't showing up anymore, can you possibly re-link/re-host some of your older story pictures?
Posted by ryanshowseason3 5 years ago Report
pics are here. Most of my stories have the pics hosted in my manip thread. managed to miss linking this one to the thread though woops.
Posted by ryanshowseason3 5 years ago Report
And by here I mean this link: https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=88&t=32934&start=180#p2267878
Posted by D0RF 6 months ago Report
I love this story but there's only 3 manips linked. Are they hosted anywhere new?