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This is a deleted scene that would have concluded the previous chapter, except I felt it had too many logistical problems and gave the villain WAY TOO MUCH CREDIT. Thus, this didn't happen in the real story. But I'd already written most of it, so enjoy the rest.
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Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report
Fun, but yeah, that would have been awfully problematic. Thanks for sharing it with us anyway!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Once I get halfway through a scene, even if it's seriously flawed, I've got to get to the payoff.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 9 years ago Report
Wow, very hot! Reminds me of my old "return system"
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I almost guarantee you subconsciously inspired it. You should probably get partial credit.
Posted by Critchett 9 years ago Report
VERY great description of a very sexy scene! I particularly liked the details taken to explain each sensation for Brit as she flushed herself. It's a lot more intimate with the experience when you have a good idea of what she's feeling instead of simply stating: "her legs went down. then her hips. then her body and breasts. then the rest of her."
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm told the sensation details are one of my strengths, so when I write a story that sort of glazes over details (like the last story I wrote), I like to really dig into how something would feel. Glad you liked it!