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The CEO descends further into madness, testing increasingly insane products that utilize the HDTF in the manufacturing process.
Meanwhile, Mark and Carla realize they have at their disposal an oft-forgotten ally.
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HA! I finally wrote something BEFORE bed time! This is written with the assumption that Brit did indeed successfully escape through the sewers, rather than being caught as occurred in the deleted scene.
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Posted by Lolwutname 9 years ago Report
Fantastic addition to the story you've had going so far. Really funny to read too. :D
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by RLord4268 9 years ago Report
How are you ever going to come down off of this high? It sounds cliche, but every chapter REALLY is better than the last. There are suggestions you've woven in I had completely forgotten about, and all manner of kinkyness.
Seriously, this is becoming a Saga. The whole HDTF universe is. Maybe it's just because apparently we share so many of the same kinks, but I don't think I'm ever going to find another series that so accurately hits the nail on the head.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Maybe I'm secretly you. No one's ever seen us in the same place at the same time...
Honestly, though, I'm sure it'll taper off. As you observed, lots of this stuff is just the incorporation of thoughts and ideas suggested by you folks. It's easy to give people what they want when they tell you what they want!
Posted by willudie 9 years ago Report
A tiny woman doing gymnastics to insert herself? Now that's something you don't see very often! Great work :D
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Heh. There comes a point in most stories I write where the bulk of the time is spent figuring out, "Okay... how do I get this thing crammed into there while they're in this position..." Sometimes I gotta get fancy.
Glad you approve!
Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report
Nice! I'm also feeling a little sorry for that CEO's assistant. Though I find myself hoping for his boss to attempt to turn one of the toys on his assistant in a fit of rage, only to find that the asistant was clever enough to exempt himself when he was getting things set up for his boss, But then, I've had something along those lines kicking around in my head for quite a while - it comes of being a professional henchman myself. ;)
Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 9 years ago Report
I have to agree that assistant makes for a fantastic henchman. I kind of want to know what his story is now.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Maybe that'll come out at some point.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Heh. I was thinking as I wrote that part where he quietly cleaned up his boss's mess and gently reminded him of the legal and technical hurdles that, "This guy's not really evil, just a really good employee." I should name him... unless I already did and forgot.
Posted by LittleBeast 9 years ago Report
"I took a really weird looking dump." It's true!
Posted by RLord4268 7 years ago Report
This one is just so good and kinky. More self-vore please!
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Self vore. It HAS been a while since I wrote some...