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Brit reunites with Julia and Lexi. Meanwhile, one of the longer-term experiments within the testing facility ends up ensnaring a member of the staff.
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I couldn't remember if I had named the big evil company or not. So it is now called Maxi-Chem.
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Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report
Nice! It's important not to remove your safety wear when working on the experimental level. I wonder what the turnover is like among their security forces.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Well Ivana got her position because of the high number of openings on that level. I think a fair amount of guards have unwillingly/willingly/eagerly been demoted to test subject over the last few days.
Posted by SSJBura 9 years ago Report
Hooray! Brit is ok and has additional plans! Yes! Also, wow that self-insertion is HOT, wow! I kinda wanna see a story now where a woman gets her arms stuck in her boobs or elsewhere, manages to get dressed or is already dressed and goes for help while trying to be secretive about what has happened. Or just a body bondage version of that.
Ooooh, so that's what happens without a safety stick.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
There's something appealing about someone out and about, discreetly seeking help while slowly slipping further into herself. Particularly when it's played for laughs instead of horror.
Posted by SSJBura 9 years ago Report
Absolutely!!! I can imagine a few close calls, a couple strained explanations, and finally her friend laughing, freeing her, then laughing some more. Maybe a sequel where the first women gets even at the friend who helped/continues to tease her by pranking back or something ^^
Posted by RLord4268 9 years ago Report
Man, that was hot. Sultry. I have to say I think I like when your scope is a little smaller, and the plot moves a little less, only because you describe the details and sensations of a narrower scene soooooo well.
The building force of the protagonist's arousal is just perfect. It went hand in hand with the depraved need of the other woman and the eventual abandonment of all reasoning by all three of the individuals.
It's just so hard to wait for the next installment, but oh so worth it. You could probably use the X-level setting for flashback vignettes of sorts farther down the road. Lord knows what went on down there.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! Yeah, I'll probably have flashbacks to the x-levels even when this is over, if only to facilitate experiments that are a little more mean spirited/inadvisable than the Mad Science Kink crew would do.
Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 9 years ago Report
Well that's going to be tricky to reverse without a safety stick, interesting to see both participants simultaneously be pred and prey.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I picture the Maxi-Chem folks having a sort of "Lost and Found" jar full of people they can't figure out how to restore.
Posted by ninth 9 years ago Report
This one is pretty intense!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by FoxGamer 9 years ago Report
Decimal point position :D
That last line was hilarious.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! It was sort of a last second addition.
Posted by Adseria 9 years ago Report
Question: this story, from this series, by this author, and all I can think about is how clever it was that you decided that Maxi-Chem use the same tag system as Eka's?
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Heh. Thanks! I was kind of proud of that one. As I was going through trying to figure out what tags I needed, I figured, "Heck, the testing coordinators probably need to organize their results somehow..."
Posted by Adseria 9 years ago Report
I must admit, you have a point!