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Hydra the goo girl has been milking the treacherous Sandy for a few days when she gets an unexpected visitor at her home in the lab.
A sequel to: http://aryion.com/g4/view/297813
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Tried for something a little more tender than I've been doing. How'd I do?
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Posted by Thanatos2k 8 years ago Report
Goo for the win
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
I find myself increasingly intrigued by it.
Posted by SSJBura 8 years ago Report
Very nice! Win-win-win it seems too!
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Everyone got a little something out of it, that's for sure.
Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 8 years ago Report
Nice, goo girls and vore must add interest to some of the trials in this setting.
Also loving Hydra's personality and "I can use her for support. Just like a skeleton!" hilariously creepy sounding but innocently meant comments.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
I always love a character that's terrifying but doesn't comprehend why someone would feel that way.
Posted by Arbon 8 years ago Report
Well now ... normally these one-off stories, when written by the vast majority of authors on these types of sites, just write a single concept and then ignore it. The entire point being the fetish and nothing else.
You have continuously impressed me by taking high concept one-off stories and then making intricate series out of them. The fact you pay more than lip service to police and regulations and sensible characters who can and will engage in vore without being jerks about it? This is downright fascinating.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
My brain just sort of latches onto little details and wanders off. It's like I have the opposite of ADD, where I can't drop a line of thought until I've explored it a bunch. Come to think of it, I think that's called obsession.
Posted by Uryx 8 years ago Report
I hope what little I wrote helped at least a tiny bit. It's an enjoyable story as always, of course, and if you'd like my help for any future projects, feel free to ask.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Yours really was helpful. It inspired me to include a few more explicit mentions of the humiliation angle, and also to make sure Hydra did some wiggling and vibrating to help the folks inside her enjoy themselves. If I get stuck on a concept in the future, I'll definitely let you know!
Posted by Uryx 8 years ago Report
That said, I didn't fail to notice that Sandy did not return the favor at all, as much as Dorothy ignored that fact, Sandy really is a selfish girl...
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Glad you picked up on that!
Posted by Amberain 8 years ago Report
With any luck, Dorothy will figure that out by the end of the imprisonment, finally get over Sandy, and decide to stick with Hydra instead.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
They certainly make a much better couple.
Posted by Uryx 8 years ago Report
Love doesn't work that way, unfortunately...
Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report
Fun! I do think you succeded at "more tender." Count me in for the readers hoping for Dorothy and Hydra to become a couple. I imagine that it could be quite interesting and rewarding for them both if Dorothy were to voluntarily take Sandy's place inside Hydra once her sentence is up.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
I could see this going another chapter or three to illustrate to Dorothy how decent Hydra is and how self-centered and sociopathic Sandy is.
Posted by mazdab 4 years ago Report
One of the sweeter story I’ve ever read. Slimegirl ftw