Valentine's Clearance by CratedCheese

Posted by angel2 9 years ago Report

Aww *hug eve*

Posted by illuminatitriforce 6 years ago Report

*eve eats you*

Posted by angel2 6 years ago Report

nah

Posted by The Saint of Ravens 9 years ago Report

Oh gawd, the feels XD Poor girl!

Posted by CratedCheese 9 years ago Report

at least she has chocolates to help her out!

Posted by QueenMetirex666 8 years ago Report

I'll be her valentine!~

Posted by Gunbot1333 9 years ago Report

I be her Valentine *hugs Eve*

Posted by Gumdrop 9 years ago Report

N'aww, wish I could cuddle with her...

Posted by ShotgunJesus 9 years ago Report

Wait why did she buy the roses then I mean you can't ea-

Oh it's about the actual holiday. Saaaad.

Posted by CratedCheese 9 years ago Report

she got them so she can pretend she was given roses
(and ate them anyway)

Posted by ILoveDragons 9 years ago Report

Awww poor lady, she needs a hug and a friend *hugs*

Posted by CratedCheese 9 years ago Report

she really does!

Posted by ILoveDragons 9 years ago Report

Well I'd give her a hug to make her feel better!

Posted by StickyGlobule 9 years ago Report

Lol clearance chocolate IS the best part of the holdiay indeed! Hope she doesnt get an upset stomach over it tho. Also wb!

Posted by CratedCheese 9 years ago Report

her stomach is the only thing that's not upset!
Thank you~

Posted by Alternoct 9 years ago Report

I literally want nothing more than for Ally to be able to hug her, tell her it's alright and spend Singles Awareness with her just chillin'.

Adorably sad, great work.

Posted by CratedCheese 9 years ago Report

it'd make her day than spending it alone~

thanks!

Posted by Ridwanwolf 9 years ago Report

Poor Evey... I know her pain. Happy national chocolate week

Posted by CratedCheese 9 years ago Report

at least some chocolate would help her~

Posted by massvore 9 years ago Report

Poor eve...

Posted by CMvoreroom 9 years ago Report

I know the feeling too TnT
Anyway, nice little story CC X)

Posted by CratedCheese 9 years ago Report

Very relateble indeed~
Thanks!

Posted by WPBcrazy 9 years ago Report

awwwwwwwwwww...I'll be her valentine :)

Posted by gulpin 9 years ago Report

*hugs Eve*

Posted by RavenXeo 9 years ago Report

did she eat the flowers? poor thing...

Posted by CGR-7 9 years ago Report

The flowers, the chocolates, most of the boxes...

Posted by CratedCheese 9 years ago Report

she ate it all!

Posted by runner 9 years ago Report

I know how you feel

Posted by Royal_Starlord 9 years ago Report

*hugs her belly* VwV~♥

Posted by Aaron1248 9 years ago Report

Too bad there isn't a male character that Eve likes that knows her secret and helps in her shenanigans...okay who wants to petition that? :3

Posted by CratedCheese 9 years ago Report

it would be quite a day for her to meet someone!

Posted by Aaron1248 9 years ago Report

Yeah it ain't her fault she has an appetite. Besides I'd be willing to throw out a character for her she can relate to. Plus he'd find her appetite hot X3

Posted by BlueMarvel611 9 years ago Report

Hey CC, good to see another work and one for Valentines Day too. It's also good to see Eve in her winter clothing that seems to fit her. That and it soo makes her look cute. But on with the review.

Now it's nice to see Evelyn in a comic again and it's nice to see its results. Now from what I can see, it would seem that your drawing technique in terms of shading and tone helps to expression the emotions here. The upper panel shows the bright tone it's got in spite of Eve's nervousness in having so much chocolate as well as the implications of a boyfriend. Now the bottom panel shows her somewhat sad expression on having eaten so much as well as how it seems rather lonely for her given.

For the comic panels, you are improving on the use of backgrounds and the drawing of furniture for it shows the surroundings of each panel's scene. From the store she entered to her runned down apartment, you really captured the world of Evelyn with your drawing style man. Now lastly is Eve herself as from top panel to bottom, it's a good transition. From her thin body to her bloated one at the bottom panel, Eve's cute in her own way. Though mostly impressed with how you were able to draw Evelyn's belly the way you did when you consider how much of those chocolate she ate and have it rest onto the floor like it did. Her unhappy and sick looking expression also says a lot and the way you are able to have her clothing fit her body's shape is amazing in of itself. Plus her hair's done nicely well as always for it moved to where Eve's currently at.

All in all, you did really well with Eve here CC. In fact given the panel, I got inspired to wanting to write a late valentine's fanfiction with my character and Eve again. Though hoped that it would be okay for me to do so given that Evelyn's your character and all. So thanks again and hope to hear from you soon.

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel