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A clerk at a new dessert shop ends up satisfying a customer very deeply.
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More insomnia. A rare "first person" story. And let's assume the customer is... a witch... or something. I don't know, I'm tired.
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Posted by Adseria 8 years ago Report
Maybe she had a HDTF?
Posted by Goblingobler 8 years ago Report
I was thinking the same thing! :D
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
That is certainly a possibility.
Posted by HungryAL 8 years ago Report
Ooh, I liked this. Knowing your aversion to the fatal side, I take it he's going to rest inside her until he can pull himself together?
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
I'd say it's more likely that he's at her mercy until she decides to restore him, but yeah, as usual, I prefer to think that he's going to be fine.
Posted by LittleBeast 8 years ago Report
>he
Huh, I assumed the narrator was a girl. I'm guessing that vagueness was deliberate?
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Vagueness was indeed deliberate. But I wasn't sure if I accidentally threw male stuff in there, since it was me writing it. So feel free to assign gender to the narrator as preferred.
Posted by Adseria 8 years ago Report
I would point out that, in the paragraph that starts "My waist slipped in,...", you also wrote "The employee in me thought poorly of how unprofessional it was to ejaculate into the mixing tub,..."
It might just be me, but the word "ejaculate" usually seems to refer to a male orgasm, more than a female one. I could be wrong though.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Yeah, that's the sort of thing that makes me think, "Is it still neutral? Ah, to heck with it."
Posted by Uryx 8 years ago Report
Ah, one of your classic insomnia stories! I'd kind of missed these, maybe next time we can have a lovely lady with a straw not wait for a mixer to enjoy another person (or two).
At any rate, great work with this one, I quite enjoyed it.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
The way ideas flicker through my head, I usually have a couple dozen little hyper-compressed vacuum, straw, and drain things happen in my brain before I settle on something to write.
Posted by bartek21 8 years ago Report
As always you write interesting stories.
Please more.
I think that it is stuck there.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Apostolos 8 years ago Report
Wonder if we could see this from her perspective too