Posted by Starcrossing 8 years ago Report

Awesome, as always.

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Thanks very much! I still get a little starstruck (no pun intended) when one of the artists I admire comments on a story. This one earned a comment from you AND  KrasnyiKoiot

Posted by RLord4268 8 years ago Report

Love it.

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!

Posted by KrasnyiKoiot 8 years ago Report

Aaaah this one was fun... @w@

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Whenever I get a hankering for some Casual Vore, it's written half with you in mind.

Posted by KrasnyiKoiot 8 years ago Report

Aaaaaah~!

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I need to draw more of it @ w@

Posted by VeryBatty 8 years ago Report

Hmm, I like this one a bunch. Love the pred's indifference.

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Thanks! Yeah, I've kind of got a thing for casual vore.

Posted by VeryBatty 8 years ago Report

Oh yeah absolutely same here

Posted by Goblingobler 8 years ago Report

Mmmmm~ Lovely X3 Guess austrailia will have to wait!

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Maybe they'll like Salt Lake City! ... After a shower.

Posted by Goblingobler 8 years ago Report

Or maybe she just keeps them if they don't like it!

Posted by joeburp22181 8 years ago Report

Haha, I totally didn't expect that!

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

One way or another, somebody's going in some other person.

Posted by joeburp22181 8 years ago Report

Haha!

Posted by KalebAdvent 8 years ago Report

How oddly coincidental.

I happen to know someone named Blake.

(that someone is me)

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

At the rate at which I'm coming up with throwaway characters, the odds are pretty good eventually I'll hit everybody's name.

Posted by Larkspurdiblock 8 years ago Report

When I saw Ruby and Blake, I thought that this was a RWBY story. Glad I was wrong - this is way better.

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

What's funny is that I had a conversation over on DA with someone who thought I'd written a RWBY fan fic and chosen to change the gender of one of the characters.

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Notably, I'm only vaguely aware of RWBY and had no idea there were characters by that name.

Posted by soline 8 years ago Report

As ever this is just wonderful writing and a fantastic story.

As much as part of me is guilty they're born of insomnia (and I hope it isn't too serious a problem for you) I adore your casual stories like this, and I simply love that they're just /good/. In a way I couldn't even pick out or identify, just some beautiful combination of the right pace and believable dialogue.

Well, that and hitting all my favourite buttons, casual vore included :)


Please keep up the fantastic work Marloweny, you really are one of the handful of excellent writers on this site, and even fewer still active and producing wonderful work.

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

I'm very happy you liked it! Comments like this are profoundly motivating. And thanks for your concern about the insomnia. So far I'm functioning alright. It's not a new problem.

Posted by ShadesofBlack 8 years ago Report

LOVE IT! The casual domination in this is so surreal and so good!

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

It's a weird interest of mine. A predator who isn't cruel, but simply doesn't necessarily feel that your opinion on being consumed should sway the decision.

Posted by rugli 8 years ago Report

Wow, thats casual vore at it finest I would say. When it happens it doesn't seems to be such big deal or does it. I find this line rather amusing "Blake struggled a bit, briefly pressing his hands against her cheeks in an attempt to lift her off before visibly realizing he’d just grabbed another woman’s bottom and quickly taking his hands away" as it highlights for me the casualness on what's happening he rather stop his effort of getting the other woman off himself when he realize that he has grabbed her ass. That suggest to me that he doesn't mind much what's happening to him at all. When he gets more used to this.
But I must say that I find the ending where the other woman swallows Ruby out of pity that Ruby and Blake are now going to be separated during their honeymoon now that Blake has entered other woman's belly through her anus rushed. I would tend to think that to do the scene justice it could do with additional paragraph or two. But I guess that's what insomnia does to you when writing during middle of a night.
There's still 1 minor thing that i also find little bit jarring when not all main characters have a name. I tend to find it easier to follow stories when all main characters have a name, but thats just me.

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Thanks! Sorry for the rushed ending and the lack of names for every character. As you've supposed, insomnia is to blame. Once I feel the sleep kicking in it becomes a race to the finish, so there's seldom a revision and often a hasty completion.

Posted by Tolun 7 years ago Report

This is one of my favorite casual vore stories. I always wish there was a little follow-up or addendum from the couple's POV, or even just a little more from their captor. Anyway, great work. Love this story. It's so cute.

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Glad you liked it. There's always the chance my stories will have sequels. Time will tell.

Posted by doinicwins 6 years ago Report

What do you think it's like, for Australians to always be upside down?

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

They're probably just relieved they're not sideways all the time like those poor people at the equator.

Posted by doinicwins 6 years ago Report

Oh yeah, it would be hard, any tiled flooring would be as about as useful as a slip'n'slide

Posted by Proxima 5 years ago Report

I like the cozy, casual, non-fatal feeling.

Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report

Casual is a real favorite of mine.

Posted by PanD109 1 year ago Report

I have one question, was she nice enough to take their luggage with her?

Posted by marloweny 1 year ago Report

I suspect she was not.