Posted by threk 8 years ago Report

Fantastic work, even if you don't remember writing it!

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Thanks!

Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report

Ooh, fun!

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

I'm glad you liked it!

Posted by anonymous19999 8 years ago Report

hot

but the fact that the sisters arent properly named feels really conspicuous. its distracting that you always have to use awkward phrases like the hungry sister to distinguish them

also i wanna know what happens with the sister inside. is she gonna struggle wildly now that she realizes what happening? does she get absorbed really quickly? all the eating metaphors suggests shes gonna be absorbed but then the story ended bfore it happens so maybe not. maybe big sister is just gonna go around town w her huge belly still two in one? does that disappoint her or turn her on?

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

I suspect I wrote this at some point in the wee hours of the morning during a trip to Virginia and didn't have the brains to spare on things like names.

After I re-read it, I felt as though I probably had the intension to have the prey absorbed to augment the remaining twin's curves, but I'm not big on things that are even remotely fatal or permanent.

Posted by Amberain 8 years ago Report

My personal take is that she was wrong. It doesn't matter how long she carries her sister around like this, nothing more is going to happen. That leaves three options, carry her indefinitely, let her back out, or take more drastic measures in an effort to finish the job.

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

I do like that take. It makes for the awkwardness of having to deal with the situation in the morning, and maybe in an ongoing way.

Posted by ShadesofBlack 8 years ago Report

Good heavens, I've missed your writing! That was lovely and steamy! I second anonymous19999's curiosities, but at the same time, I like that it was left to imagination.

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Thanks! Heaven only knows what I imagined would happen next the first time, but if I were to continue it now, I suspect... well, probably something odd, since that's what seems to fall out of my head.

Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report

Since the odd things that fall out of your head are a lot of fun, I'd certainly enjoy seeing where this might go from here. :)

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

I'm glad you appreciate the bizarre crumbs of my subconscious.

Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 8 years ago Report

"I don't remember writing this."
Well apparently your subconscious sleepwriting self is still good at it.

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

I suspect the creative part of me is the part that doesn't sleep.

Posted by Goblingobler 8 years ago Report

Great little story! :D Would love a little post-mortum. Or have it turn out that she couldn't reabsorb her and have the twin trapped in her womb. :3

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

As with all of my stories, there's always the chance I'll dig back in.

Posted by thisgirlroolzz 8 years ago Report

MMM, that was very nice. I could imagine being in the position of either sister. Since it ended with no real conclusion I imagined that the unbirthed twin was absorbed and that they became one, but both shared the body and were able to communicate in thought and they were never lonely again.

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Not a bad take on the ending!

Posted by narcissist 8 years ago Report

I swear to god, dude. Every time I get off to a good story and look to see who wrote it, it's you! Keep up the good work

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

I shall continue to do my best!