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Rhaana and Kyle discover that getting him back home is going to require a little more experimentation.
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This has been done for a while, mostly, but I wasn't sure folks would really want to read it. It's got more world building than is really necessary. And also implies a crossover element with one of my other stories.
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Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
That was quite the spectacular end to this duos story... if it is the end. You think you got another one in you or are you moving on to another couple? Maybe a dope little teaser as to the fantasy creatures species, mayhaps?
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
If I leave any dangling threads (Rhaana's second request to Figaro, the fact she's ordered but not yet received a potion), that's a dead giveaway there's more story floating in my head. But they ARE headed back to the restaurant, so some other dates may be observed/spun off.
Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
Spectacular! I eagerly, yet patiently, await the return of this pair.
Posted by LastRider100 7 years ago Report
Love this series! Also like how it started as a one shot and became something more :) Would like to see more of Rhaana and Kyle.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Thanks! You probably WILL see more.
Posted by HereticalTendencies 7 years ago Report
You're very good at emotional metaphors, really add a lot of 'weight' to the sexual scenes.
They continue to be a very cute pairing :)
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Glad you like it!
Posted by MrImpervious 7 years ago Report
I'm actually about as interested in the world building/politics of the fantasy world as I am about the sexy. XD
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Well gosh!
Posted by MrImpervious 7 years ago Report
Do have to say; between the two, Earth does seem like the better world to live in by far.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Especially if you're a human.
Posted by Amberain 7 years ago Report
I was a little surprised by your comment in the description, of course I'd want to read more about these two! I know artists of all sorts tend to be harder on their own work than other people are, but you rarely write anything that I don't like, and I definitely don't mind world building. Sorry that I haven't been commenting as much as I used to. I would love to see what sort of trouble these two get into after Kyle gets his magical durability. The worry Rhaana had, about her sister mistaking him for an offering, comes to mind. Though I'm not sure how he'd end up back in the ceremonial robes again. I'm also curious about the second request, that we readers weren't told about, though I do have one guess . . .
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
I know there are plenty of people who wouldn't be on board with a romance between a human and a non-anthro dragon. Plus with all the non-vore character and world stuff I wasn't sure people would be willing to sit through it. It just felt self-indulgent and a little to "is this for anyone but me?"
I'm happy to know that I was wrong!
As seemingly always happens, you bring up a point that's brilliant, in that now Frix can accidentally eat Kyle and it's not a fatal end of the story! One of these days I'll cover that second request.
Posted by ethan3369 7 years ago Report
my option is summed by one word: MOAR
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
I shall endeavor to oblige!
Posted by Groblek 7 years ago Report
Fun! It's nice to see a bit more of these two, and that they've managed to make it almost all the way to a successful end of their date.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Yep, nearly to the end of their date.
"So, how did your date with the internet girl go?"
"Pretty good? She only accidentally ate me once! Though she did cram me inside her on purpose three other times..."
Posted by JMW 7 years ago Report
Very nice! I was hoping that you would continue this and you have done a great job with it. Thanks for the nice story!
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
I'm happy you liked it!
Posted by JMW 7 years ago Report
Its a great story. Your creating a new world and not just focusing on the short sex parts like most do your building on something more. I like it a lot and am looking forward to the next chapter ^^
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Certain things just get my brain running in circles and I need to explore different parts of the setting that would be necessary for a story to work.
Posted by robopratchett 5 years ago Report
Don't you dare apologise for world building Marloweny, it shows the love and dedication you have to your creations. To paraphrase Sgt Colon, a painting of a naked lady is pornography, but add some naked babies floating around, and then it's art, and thats what your world building is, floating naked babies. It's possible I've lost my train of thought here...
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you like the storytelling.