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Business, Pleasure, Combining [COMMISSION] By marloweny -- Report

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Another commission for  Arkron.

A young woman, training to be as skilled a contortionist as her mother, shows off her latest trick and finds herself learning a new one.

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LittleBeast

Posted by LittleBeast 7 years ago Report

I am a bit amused by just how much of the "self-vore" tag is you. :)

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Find a niche, fill a niche.

RLord4268

Posted by RLord4268 7 years ago Report

More of these two. Take my money, take it!

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

As always, it could happen.

RLord4268

Posted by RLord4268 7 years ago Report

Magnificent!

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Thanks!

SSJBura

Posted by SSJBura 7 years ago Report

I have loved your combinations of contortionists and self-vore. Oh man! Instant fav!

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!

maxpayne98

Posted by maxpayne98 7 years ago Report

You hit it out of the ball park

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

It was a fun one to write.

ShadesofBlack

Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report

This was an incredible read. Contortion combined with dimensional space innards is fantastic. I found the actions and results of them to be intensely erotic, along with the emotions described as "friends became more." Although chewing is hardly what my first thought would have been in those circumstances, obviously it was a good one.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Thanks! This was a rare sort of feedback loop. The commissioner enjoyed the Contortionist scene from one of my vignette collections and commissioned the chewing, merging extension of it.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 7 years ago Report

Ooh, fun! I hope we see more of these two - or three, depending on how one counts Belana at the moment...

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Just because of my distaste for permanent changes, I might have to come up with an entertaining scenario to at least give mother and daughter a chance at individuality again.

Skulljack17

Posted by Skulljack17 7 years ago Report

Love it love it love it! With the possibility of separating again like you mentioned, I'd be curious if there would be other fun ways for them to get to become Belana again. Like one contorting down, and then being shoved up the butt of the other before they then do the same. Even if it doesn't mix them, I like the idea of being so self compressed that way.

Also I was hoping a little that Annette might have blown a bubble with them, or at least tried to. :3

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Glad you liked it! This was a commission, so much of what you saw was specifically requested, but I've written non-commissioned sequels in the past.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 6 years ago Report

Wasn’t there a second one that’s from the pov of a separate contortionist tricking the professional prey somewhere and mentions Belana in passing?

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

I believe that's Kinda Sorta this one: https://aryion.com/g4/view/417462

The third portion of it.

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 6 years ago Report

Ah thanks

giggityman69

Posted by giggityman69 5 years ago Report

What a unique and interesting story. This is one I'd love to see a comic for at some point ;)

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report

That'd be a cool thing to see.