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Commission for kattu
Our hero was spared for the moment, but his time draws nearer every day...
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Posted by Apostolos 6 years ago Report
Hmm have they ever experimented with the other orifices?
Posted by Nomboy 6 years ago Report
Not these girls, no. Only mouths for them... so far.
Posted by Apostolos 6 years ago Report
Hmm maybe he could accidentally fuck a girl into one of them while they were eating her out, maybe they wouldn’t really digest that way but slowly regress or something
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 6 years ago Report
Cmon MC, just a few more weeks and it'll be jacket season. This was a pretty steamy read my dude gg.
Posted by Nomboy 6 years ago Report
And then the sweet leather jacket can make its triumphant return!
Nice call back, btw!
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 6 years ago Report
Here's to hoping he gets to use it.
Posted by Hereforvore 6 years ago Report
These are awesome!
Posted by Nomboy 6 years ago Report
Thanks so much! Nice user pic btw!
Posted by Hereforvore 6 years ago Report
Glad you like it! :)
Posted by USful 6 years ago Report
Great story! Love the style, leads to a natural cliff hanger. We'll see if there's a next one or not :D
Posted by Nomboy 6 years ago Report
Glad you like it! ;) There will likely be a third installment, but the commissioner doesn't know if it'll be from a new person's perspective or not. You know as well as I do whether he survives this or not.
Posted by minasan 6 years ago Report
I hope he does. I always like stories where the predator has a friend that helps them like this and is off the menu.
Posted by Bright 6 years ago Report
Could write it like one of the girls found the persons diary.
Posted by Nomboy 6 years ago Report
Each one ends so it is kind of like 'found footage'. We've been considering the options. Could be Ryan (whose name was established at the start of part 1 but was not included in part 2) again, could be one of the girls.
Posted by Jamie263 6 years ago Report
I enjoyed that. Nice work
Posted by Nomboy 6 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Kelly 6 years ago Report
Just gound part one and two they are amazing cant wait to see what happend next
Posted by Nomboy 6 years ago Report
Could go either way really... but I'd put a safe bet on some form of human consumption.
Posted by Kelly 6 years ago Report
x3 What a twist :P
Posted by Nomboy 6 years ago Report
oh and thanks for saying so!
Posted by Kelly 6 years ago Report
Nah thank you for taking the time creating it ^-^
Posted by PhilipHarris 6 years ago Report
I hope there's a part three to this. Great work!
Posted by Zelda 4 years ago Report
Story is amazing, hope there's a part 3
Posted by Destroyah23 4 years ago Report
I kinda hope he doesn't die
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
Been looking for this story lol .
Posted by Nomboy 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you found it then!
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
It needs another
Posted by SynthesizedJewel 4 years ago Report
I've read several of your stories so far, and this by far has been my favorite! To the point where I decided to bother logging in and both faving and commenting.
I really like the diary format and the way everything is described, and how we get to see the main character's thoughts and feelings about the matter. I also like the dynamics between the three characters, and their occasional guests. Beth is probably my personal favorite for a lot of reasons, but Mary is fun, too, and I like the contrast between the pair.
You also write things in a... respectable and mature way, almost? I'm not sure how to quite describe it. But you handle the topics like it's relatively normal rather than trying to find all these "exotic" words to change in all the time, and you don't attempt to dance delicately around calling things exactly what they are. It's another aspect I enjoy about your writing.
I'd also love to see a continuation, but understand if it's not going to happen. I enjoyed reading these two, anyway!
Posted by Nomboy 4 years ago Report
Thank you for the thoughtful analysis! I have some experience professionally writing, and my upbringing didn't lend itself to using the more vulgar terms for sex and anatomy.
I think a continuation would be fun, too, but I'm far too busy to write one without being specifically commissioned for it.
Posted by SynthesizedJewel 4 years ago Report
That makes sense. Your skill really shows! Perhaps some day, if I'm in a position to be able to get commissions, I'll have to come back and see if I can't get one for this.