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On a cold and potentially stormy night, Killian finds himself with freezing toes. With no slippers in sight and no money for heating, he must rely on his predatory roommate... But who can stop at just the tip?
This is the 9th story for my nut November challenge and one of my favorites so far.
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Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 6 years ago Report
What a twist, love me some guilty preds
Posted by surtech5 6 years ago Report
Thank you for letting me know that tag existed, I will for sure be searching that... when November ends.
Posted by Altimos 6 years ago Report
Well... that's what happens when you date a pred XD
*Goes out and looks for a predator for a girlfriend...
<3 <3 <3
Posted by surtech5 6 years ago Report
Well if you want a happier ending with dating a pred then you should read my Saw... Fan fiction? I guess? Man... It feels weird when you say it out loud.
Posted by surtech5 6 years ago Report
Just realized I haven't actually uploaded that one yet. I wrote it a few days ago and kinda forgot I was ahead of schedule... Welp, thanks to you it gets posted today instead of tomorrow.
Give yourself a pat on the back.
Posted by Altimos 6 years ago Report
*Pats you on the back*
W-wait...
*Pats self on the back*
Posted by ShinjiIkari 6 years ago Report
I want a predator girlfriend too! And yes I read the saw thing earlier it was totally hot.
Posted by MechaSharkZilla 6 years ago Report
OOF. That was a dark twist. Well written, but... Damn.
Head canon of her forgetting that she ate that $20 worth of ramen, activate!
Posted by surtech5 6 years ago Report
My headcanon is that she turned herself into the authorities for an 'unwilling churn' and became a high school and college speaker for the dangers of vore and how to set up safeguards to prevent repeats... In fact, that was the original ending before I cut it for being too much unnecessary info... but now you know.
Posted by minasan 6 years ago Report
I'd have liked this story much better if it had gone as they originally wanted, with him becoming her boyfriend and regular belly filler without being digested.
Posted by ryanshowseason3 6 years ago Report
Good story but feels like a plot device or two is missing. Why does she end up digesting him when she says she can control it with ease?
Feels like there should be a reason there like she's tipsy or falls asleep to a food show that makes her hungry in half sleep.
As it is things just completely flip flop from what the story tells you is the case.
Otherwise I liked the dynamic between the two here.