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another Anthro story set in the world built by BizzareBlue . this time we have a snapping turtle walking home in the hunting hours and things take a unexpected turn.
not sure how this reads, i was just writing ideas on how i thought a turtle would be in a vore dominated society. this is part 1 of 2 the other part is WIP. but like with everything i have no idea when it will manifest.
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Posted by StarBomber109 6 years ago Report
You know what, this is a good story. It has a solid conflict and a lot of tension. I'm actually looking forward to the next part!
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
glad you enjoyed it, there is a fun little twist i don't think anyone will see coming.
Posted by SuperheroFood 6 years ago Report
Good work, looking forward to part 2
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
it is my next non-pony story on my to do list, just have to complete a commission and I will get right on it. :)
Posted by Speedyblupi 6 years ago Report
"i was just writing ideas on how i thought a turtle would be in a vore dominated society."
This reminds me of The Mouse and His Child. It's a book which I would describe as "imagine Toy Story and Watership Down combined, plus metaphysics". There's a lot of casual predation in the story, including from a snapping turtle who writes plays and contemplates infinity.
It's very weird, but it's got some interesting (and often fairly graphic) descriptions of predation and other violence. The society is quite odd among other fictional animal societies - the animals are feral, but generally civilised and intelligent, but they also hunt and kill each other all the time.
There's an animated film, but it massively tones down the violence and moral ambiguity of the characters.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
might have to give this a read.