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Dana and Krisa decide to play a new game of choice.
Sam deals with the fallout of her choice and the resulting urges and feelings that emerge from actions.
Cali discovers that all is not perfect in paradise.
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Posted by Marked 6 years ago Report
Great to see the return of these stories. Very cool to see the events mainly from a predator’s point of view as well. I’ll be eager for more.
Posted by Littledude 6 years ago Report
There will be a few prey POVs but this will be mostly Pred. Thank you for the feedback.
Posted by Kasra 6 years ago Report
I really am enjoying the three presumably simultaneous stores! I'm curious to see how things start to intersect, if they do at all.
Plus, love the "Auntie Van" reference. Guess Tuck and Vana are still doing pretty well!
Posted by Littledude 6 years ago Report
Possibly. This might take place before, simultaneously with, or after their story.
Posted by Kasra 6 years ago Report
That's very true. To be honest I spent a few minutes trying to find a physical description of Tuck to confirm coloration, and in the end I decided to assume. Either way I love the connection.
Posted by Littledude 6 years ago Report
Keeping characters consistent is difficult sometimes. I think I made Sam and Van related partly because I'd used the same description with both of them. But Tuck is described with chestnut brown fur in The Commercial story, though I was a little vague in These Messages.
Posted by Kasra 6 years ago Report
Thaaat's my mistake. I KNEW I was forgetting something...
Posted by DrakeZephyr 6 years ago Report
Gotta admit, really hoping we get to see the, devoted tour guide have her denial firmly shattered by, oh... a newsheadline of a certain missing heir, or a hush hush memo saying there has been some... minor misunderstanding, and to please look out for this mouse... and need to face the bitter reality her digestive tract has been used for assassination and that her own sense of denial helped it along... but then I'm the slightly vindictive type.
Personal vendettas your tales always inspire in me towards certian characters aside, it's an intriguing tale you've chosen, I can't wait to see where you go with it. Reminds me of the dragon sacrifices concept in a way... oh, if someone must die occassionally,can we not choose who... the lazy, the criminals, the stupid... but how long till the lowest on the rung is the son who isn't workshy, but just hasn't found his calling... or the aunt who has worked dutifully all her life... doesn't deserve this just because she had a fall, she'll be productive again... and then you start wondering who is making the decisions... and why certain people are seemingly immune... Of course, the vastness of scale in yours does bring such interesting opportunities for corruption to thrive... I do admire your skill. I, couldn't write the characters you do.
Posted by Littledude 6 years ago Report
I find my characters tend to be products of their environments and their wants and personalities come from the sort of experiences or challenges such an environment produces, though I try to keep them sympathetic to people from our universe.
As for the character you have a vendetta against, assuming it's who I think it is, let's just say she's getting her head yanked out of the sand, hard.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 6 years ago Report
Well, all characters should be like that... but, I know from experience I have difficulty writing a character convincingly if they are... handling their problems especially poorly. Your chahracters always handle their problems... convincingly to their own flaws and mindsets, which I respect. Not every character has to be likable, or relatable to everyone, so long as they are... real to who they are.
Posted by Littledude 6 years ago Report
It can be difficult giving characters flaws, that I know, especially if they're the protagonist. We always put a bit of ourselves and people we know into our writing. Personally, I don't view flaws so much as a negative trait as what part of a character keeps him or her from achieving their goal, or what causes them to make things worse.