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My first story on the site, and the first in a series. Let's see how this goes.
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Posted by Base54 6 years ago Report
Very well written, I enjoyed it thouroughly and its tough to come across a Vore story with lore and an actual story other than having the characters eat each other for the sake of eating each other. Definitely going to enjoy reading the rest of it.
Posted by VoidInVoid 6 years ago Report
Thanks. I hope you do enjoy the rest as much as you did this one.
Posted by rotta287 5 years ago Report
Baffling instances of words being sliced in half by rogue spaces aside, this is definitely a decent start to a long series.
Posted by VoidInVoid 5 years ago Report
Yeah, it's something to do with how the site interprets standard Word documents. I switched to Rich Text File later, and the problem seemingly resolved itself.
I'm glad you liked it despite the spaces. I wouldn't consider these early parts my best work, but I do consider them my most important.
Posted by rotta287 5 years ago Report
Yeah it isn't great, but I know this is your first online story post.
Heavens know I am not proud of my first story attempts. By that standard this is really good.
Posted by Matteo42 4 years ago Report
For a starter, that's pretty damn good! Is this all OC, or is it based off of some pre-existing story?
Well, imma enjoy reading all the other stories you got ;)
Posted by VoidInVoid 4 years ago Report
It's all OC. I'm not one to write fanfiction. Make references to characters from other stories as if they existed in this one? Absolutely. But not outright fanfiction.
I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Personally, I think my writing gets better as it goes on.