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Raikou wants to get a lot closer to her master Ritsuka.
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A patreon reward for Stiff. It utilizes characters from a series I was wholly ignorant of before the request, so hopefully I did okay.
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Posted by TryMeIke 6 years ago Report
oh! would love more fate stuff with you. especially with tamamo.
Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report
It could happen, particularly if the commissioner wants another.
Posted by TryMeIke 6 years ago Report
I would commission it myself if I could. but yes more fate would be lovely.
Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report
You'll be happy to learn the next one indeed features Tamamo.
Posted by TryMeIke 6 years ago Report
yay!
Posted by S1nZ 6 years ago Report
Really nice story, looking forward to more stuff like this~
Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Goblingobler 6 years ago Report
Okay I really loved this. Regardless of setting. It was a really cool concept, especially trapping her in the clothes, and making her watch herself vanish in the mirror!
Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report
I do dig a nice "slip the clothes back on so they can't get out" scene.
Posted by Goblingobler 6 years ago Report
I'm very fond of it. Like unbirthing someone and then slipping on panties, as if that'll keep them secure. :3
Posted by ArgobargSoup 6 years ago Report
A nice, cute, intimate story~
Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Draconatedz 6 years ago Report
Wonderful story. I would say you captured Raikou's maternal madness quite well, along with her dominating charms. Ritsuka is the player character's self insert, so she can act however you please, and I would say you did a good job capturing the serious side of her that I imagine.
I would love to see more fate stuff, and would certainly commission it myself.
Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report
Glad you liked it!
Posted by Apostolos 6 years ago Report
I really want to see a continuation to this
Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report
There is indeed a continuation. Just gotta post it. Maybe in a few days when it's polished.
Posted by Deviantfan16 6 years ago Report
Is Ritsuka gonna regress into a Baby now?
Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report
Nope. She just sort of relaxes in there for a bit, then back out for more shenanigans.
Posted by Deviantfan16 6 years ago Report
Oh. I kinda wanted to see Raiko nurse an infant Ritsuka until she grows up again. Probably could hand Wave it by saying they’ll age back up in a week or so.
Posted by boomerangfish 5 years ago Report
For someone who didn't know about Fate before, you did really well. Wow!
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by LarryTheLewder 2 years ago Report
i liked this one, especially the ending parts