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Follow the lives of a Bully and the herm she torments.
We'll follow them from their last year of high school all the way into adulthood.
And there are sure to be many meals along the way. But are there any happy endings to be had?
Who knows.
This is one of my favoritest stories.
In other news my game is in for another round of development soon. Some of the tiers are cheaper now too so grab yourself a spot if you like my manips or writing and have a few bucks to spare for a month :P
https://www.patreon.com/ryanshowseason3
And before anyone asks the model name is Peta Jensen
Manips here if Imgur ever dies: https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=88&t=32934&p=2736076#p2736076
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Posted by Slimshod 5 years ago Report
Short and sweet. I liked the brevity of the moments you picked out to document their life. Very nice.
Posted by DB1224 5 years ago Report
That was....Amazing. I love it ! Keep up the good work !
Posted by FuzzyTaco 5 years ago Report
I am usually not a fan of your stuff but... this was different. Better. It kept your vibe while being less... Edgy, to put it one way. Above all: it had a good ending. It wasn't one where a bunch of people got gurgled and the predator sauntered off; that was the start. It was the afterwards, the steadily development of the characters, WITHOUT them dying, that made it downright better. It felt GOOD to read, and not just a one-off pleasurefest. You made Abby and Sandra memorable.
Vore, like Stockholm Syndrome, both displayed in Bully Gone Bride, are tools for writing. In my humble oppinon, they should never be the focus of the story, rather it should be the characters and how they react to it.
I hope dearly to see more like this. Maybe even a sequel involving the characters? I would turn it into a fully fledged, multi-chapter story, but thats just me.
Posted by Arrogancy 5 years ago Report
One of the best stories on this site.
Posted by awakener 5 years ago Report
Easily one of my favorite stories by you to date if not number 1 of your stories on my list.
Posted by BardicLasher 5 years ago Report
Great piece! Plenty of fun!
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 5 years ago Report
Definetly some of the warmer stuff that youve written. Funnily enough i think Abby ended up whipping Sandy into place towards the end
Posted by Solmaximuta 5 years ago Report
This was lovely. Played my heart strings like a fiddle.
Admittedly, I would have wanted a far more tear filled response from Sandra. And a final marriage conclusion that is that was a tad more romantically charge (still bitchy, but less tsundere and more sultry).
But, it played my heart strings like a fiddle.
Great job.
Posted by Dooot 5 years ago Report
Can i ask you a question about your game?
Posted by ryanshowseason3 5 years ago Report
Feel free to pm me.
Posted by Dooot 5 years ago Report
Ok how?
Posted by ryanshowseason3 5 years ago Report
O_O
Press my username and then the PM button near the top?
Or just ask it here if you can't figure out how to PM