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Glitz and Glamour's Blue Show By marloweny -- Report

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This is a semi-canonical performance of everyone's favorite stage magicians, Glitz and Glamour. It is an overdue birthday gift for Bluescreen.

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Snekpizza

Posted by Snekpizza 6 years ago Report

I love it

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Thanks!

sweetladyamy

Posted by sweetladyamy 6 years ago Report

Magical Comedy. Don't see that anymore, lolz

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Indeed.

Bizza

Posted by Bizza 6 years ago Report

goddamn

Could we get a part 2 elaborating on the hour timeskip?

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Possibly.

ShadesofBlack

Posted by ShadesofBlack 6 years ago Report

Oh dear heavens! That ending! I love it! These two are definite trouble, and especially after that hour, I wonder how many folks are getting some long term fun, or confusion, out of their show!

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 6 years ago Report

I kind of feel like the girls were a bit too blatant, not actually doing much to protect Gary's trade secret. Combined with them leaving him a mess to clean up, I kind of expect Gary to be a bit upset, upon his return. Though I hope that he doesn't take away Glitz and Glamour's magic privileges entirely. On the other hand, the outdoor part of the disappearing train trick was really good, it's only the indoor portion that needs some work. So perhaps he can adapt some of their ideas for his own show. I'm glad Glitz and Glamour are getting better at this, but I don't feel like they're ready for their own show quite yet.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

One of the reasons I list it as "Semi-canonical" is, thanks to the blatant mystic nature of the tricks and the disregard for the well being of the audience, the twins were a little out of character. But Gary showing up to set them straight might be worth making this full canon for the series.

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 6 years ago Report

They were just trying to make sure their first show was impressive, memerable. Start their solo carrier off with a bang. They lost sight of the other side of the coin. That there should also be some subtlety, and plausable deniability about the true nature of the act. I'm sure Gary will be able to educate them, though I've no idea what form those lessons might take.