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It's another lovely day in Santa Monica, California. Vanessa and Manilla are a happily married couple enjoying life and each other's company. But after one strange night, Vanessa starts going through some ... changes. Strange, strange changes. And Santa Monica might not be ready for Vanessa's new hunger...
Welp, here's a story I finished in 2018, but never got around to releasing. I wrote this for a good friend of mine, Korram. Writing it was a blast, in fact, it's my favourite written story ever. I do hope you loved it as much as me. Who knows, we might see a sequel somewhere in the future...
PS: This was originally titled Filling Fresh Scales. With the release of the companion art, I've changed the thumbnail and title to match, as well as updating the formatting.
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Posted by Halcyon 5 years ago Report
Really fantastic work! I loved reading earlier parts of this when it was in-progress, and now the final piece is really lovely! Great job with this ^^
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
Thank you for your feedback. As for the earlier version I sent you, honestly, almost nothing was changed. I just changed a few words, did a little bit, and updated the title.
Posted by ouphe 5 years ago Report
Quite entertaining. I would encourage a sequel, since there is a twin to pursue...
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
While a sequel might be welcome, I don't recommend they go after Ebony's twin...
Might be a bit suspicious after all.
Posted by NightRoller 5 years ago Report
Decent story. Not my cup of tea, so I couldn't fully enjoy it, but I read until the part where she's revealed to be a herm.
I dunno. This one just didn't really click with me.
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
Hey, thanks for the comment regardless!
Posted by CoinToast 4 years ago Report
Well this is certainly funny. Not my cup of tea, but a relaxing read nonetheless.
Posted by TastesUndivided 4 years ago Report
THIS IS AMAZING. They are sooooo cute together. I've read way to many vore stories with sad endings so this story lifts up my little heart and almost makes me wanna cry.
Posted by VividLucidity 4 years ago Report
Thank you, thank you so much! I do enjoy vore stories that have good endings, and I'm glad you liked this too!
Posted by Rubiont-47 3 years ago Report
I liked how you showed adaptation to the transformation. A little fast, but compare to other things that I read about sudden transformation. Your story is really good.
Also. There is a thing that bothered me. If she studies snakes, then why shy suddenly forgot how snakes can regruditate their food?
Posted by VividLucidity 3 years ago Report
Thank you! And yeah, I do feel like it was a bit quite. As for your other question, that is a food question! I have not thought about it before. The reason she could not regurgitate her food was because I didn't want her to, and so wrote that~ But, I suppose you could say that while snakes can regurgitate, she did not know what muscles she had to use to do it with her naga body. Knowing how a snake can regurgitate might not tell you how to regurgitate when you are a snake person herself. Or maybe her naga body works differently to snakes? Or maybe she panicked and forgot her knowledge about snakes.
Posted by Rubiont-47 3 years ago Report
Yes, I understand that for the plot prey was soppouse to be digested, but at least a little description about it detail, why Vanessa can not regurgitate her like a snake,would make this story more complicated. In a good way