I wasn't expecting to see more of Hydra and Dorothy anytime soon, so I definately need to thank Groblek for that.
After reading this though, it was difficult to image what you could write the next time, to top this chapter.
Then it struck me, you already have exactly what you need, within your other stories. You can just write a crossover, where you bring in a few more scientists. :)
I reread the story because it was wholesome, then I realized something. Dorothy implied she was into bondage with Hydra wrapping around her. We also saw Hydra being able to control people she enveloped. I doubt a story would be made at this point between these two, but I imagine it would have been wholesome "bondage". I also had a laugh thinking about them winning a wet t-shirt contest.
Sorry I just had to voice this and thanks again for the wholesome stories.
Just read through all this series, and thank you for NOT bringing Sandy back for a 'revenge' style ending. She already got her punishment, but as this tale went through with the talk of Hydra being 'vulnerable' etc I really worried this was going to end with Sandy being stupid enough to try for a second meal with Hydra in Dorothy's home pool and diluted. True, she'd have to be particularly stupid to do so given how well known it was what happened last time. If Hydra had vanished she would be the first suspect, but sometimes people can be that stupid. This is so much better a culmination for this, especially as if Hydra had been forced to deal fatally with Sandy it would really have hurt the character and her relationship with Dorothy, even if it had seem to have been the only way.
Beautiful tale and very nice character progression Marloweny. Keep up the wonderful work :)
Posted by Smb64 5 years ago Report
this was awesome! it's pretty much the same way I imagine two of my character's getting along!~
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it!
Posted by ShadesofBlack 5 years ago Report
This is absolutely beautiful!
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Thanks! Groblek came up with the story for this one. I just came up with the words.
Posted by Amberain 5 years ago Report
I wasn't expecting to see more of Hydra and Dorothy anytime soon, so I definately need to thank Groblek for that.
After reading this though, it was difficult to image what you could write the next time, to top this chapter.
Then it struck me, you already have exactly what you need, within your other stories. You can just write a crossover, where you bring in a few more scientists. :)
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Ha! Forget Avengers. Get ready for the most ambitious crossover of all time: HDTF/Goo Inside and Out!
Posted by perra95 5 years ago Report
Amazing story. Loved every second off it
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Threadzless 5 years ago Report
<3
Posted by CioneDavnira 5 years ago Report
Quite lovely. Will there be more chapters sometime in the future?
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Possibly. They're a fun pair.
Posted by CioneDavnira 5 years ago Report
Indeed. ^w^
Posted by RoundSquare 4 years ago Report
I reread the story because it was wholesome, then I realized something. Dorothy implied she was into bondage with Hydra wrapping around her. We also saw Hydra being able to control people she enveloped. I doubt a story would be made at this point between these two, but I imagine it would have been wholesome "bondage". I also had a laugh thinking about them winning a wet t-shirt contest.
Sorry I just had to voice this and thanks again for the wholesome stories.
Posted by Gimlet 3 years ago Report
Just read through all this series, and thank you for NOT bringing Sandy back for a 'revenge' style ending. She already got her punishment, but as this tale went through with the talk of Hydra being 'vulnerable' etc I really worried this was going to end with Sandy being stupid enough to try for a second meal with Hydra in Dorothy's home pool and diluted. True, she'd have to be particularly stupid to do so given how well known it was what happened last time. If Hydra had vanished she would be the first suspect, but sometimes people can be that stupid. This is so much better a culmination for this, especially as if Hydra had been forced to deal fatally with Sandy it would really have hurt the character and her relationship with Dorothy, even if it had seem to have been the only way.
Beautiful tale and very nice character progression Marloweny. Keep up the wonderful work :)