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The Immi-girls play Hottie Hangman By ryanshowseason3 -- Report

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A group of assholes roll up to a random bar but get more than they bargained for. WAAY MORE.

Done as a rare request for someone who helped me out with patching a nasty bug in my game.

The original prompt idea being, lesbian poly circle enjoys snuffing and cooking men but not in any sexual way. Then it evolved from there.

It's a little political for my usual tastes but still sorta hot. Fyi it was either this idea or one of a few others. One being centered around a racist white woman dominating a black guy and churning him up, or another with a kind hearted squad of soldiers in Afghanistan being gurgled by female sexual terrorists who take advantage of them. Which aren't terrible prompts, but I don't know how well received this one will be cause it's a bit political like I said before and I'm not sure I wanna delve too far into this pit trap.

It's a short story though, not meant for greatness if I'm honest.

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Redatheart

Posted by Redatheart 4 years ago Report

Way too political. It's a request, of course, so good on you for fulfilling it, but geez.

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 4 years ago Report

¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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Posted by 349qg853437tr48tr 4 years ago Report

The utopia you made in your website edits weren’t as inflammatory as this... good on you, though. You worked with what you had.

LucifersChef

Posted by LucifersChef 4 years ago Report

Might try out those other prompts if you don't mind

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 4 years ago Report

Absolutely, go for it. Lemme know when you post any.

firefox01

Posted by firefox01 4 years ago Report

I have yet to read the story but the concept of female terrorist gurgling soldiers has promise, lots of evil taunting, that would play to your strengths, you write such a good villian

LucifersChef

Posted by LucifersChef 4 years ago Report

Would enjoy seeing more non-vore snuff from you actually. Though, the politics and non-sexual stuff isn't really my jam.

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 4 years ago Report

Snuff is my favorite thing in this story really. It's an interest just haven't explored plugging it into vore too much and that's my core focus for better or worse.

Aterzo

Posted by Aterzo 4 years ago Report

nice story, if it had happened to me, I wanted to end up in Miri's thighs

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Posted by pendingdelete02g2698b 4 years ago Report

Gotta say, you definitely picked the least bad of your three options.

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 4 years ago Report

Still not terribly proud of this one in retrospect.

Odin1366

Posted by Odin1366 3 years ago Report

He took up three fucking parking spaces? Fuck the political stuff, that is evil.