Posted by longwayofftiff 5 years ago Report

I mean, I'd totally shudder in disdain, but...those girls were TOLD to wear red! Not a monster removal issue >dusts hands off<

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report

Haha, I guess if the vore is self-inflicted enough, it's not really your job to bail them out, eh?

Posted by zobabu 5 years ago Report

For the sake of your guests I hope this story wasn't based on the events of your own birthday x3

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report

Yeah, my actual birthday was far less exciting than this, thankfully. Mostly consisted of being vaguely sick, laying about any playing Dark Souls. xD

Posted by zobabu 5 years ago Report

Ah being sick on ones birthday sucks, hopefully you still had a bit of fun!
Oh you also play the souls games? May I ask which part you are playing?

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report

Yeah, it wasn't the most exciting, but I still had a pretty great time. Got take-out, lounged about and whatnot. xD

Oh yeah, I've been a huge fan of FromSoftware since Demon's Souls! Don't have as much game-time as I once did though, and their games are huge. Currently playing Dark Souls 3 gradually when I've got the time.
I definitely plan to try Bloodborne and Sekiro eventually, too. :D

Posted by zobabu 5 years ago Report

Dude, I could really use your help as a phantom xD

After playing through Sekiro about 3 weeks ago I really got into the whole FromSoftware 'hype' and tried out Dark souls 3 but I have to admit that I find it harder than Sekiro. The bosses are just so much bigger and all. . . I'm overwhelmed xD

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report

Yeah, FromSoftware is really great, aren't they?

I'd love to help out, but I usually put off the coop/PvP in these games until I've finished them, so I can drink in the atmosphere at my own pace . . . aaand I also don't currently have a PlayStation Plus subscription, so they won't let me play online regardless. xD

Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report

I believe I am repeating myself by saying this, but your stories are awesome, thank you so much for making such an entertaining and funny story out of my picture which I now have posted:D

The story is quite funny and comes with a moral lesson about doing what you are told. Not that it will help those girls much now though...
Now I see what you meant when you mentioned that the colors would be important ; )

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report

Thank you!

This was a hugely fun little project to put together, and I'm very glad you think it lives up to expectation! Thanks a bunch for the opportunity.

And yeah, it was partway through when I realized that a lizard with color-coded eating habits might work well, especially since both of the seemingly-unconcerned characters in the foreground were wearing red. x3

Posted by Philosoraptor 5 years ago Report

Great story as usual and this one has a unique ring of authenticity which we normally do not see in the typical "women eating monster stories". Perhaps you were aware of the fact that at some zoos, the world's largest carnivorous lizards, the Komodo Dragons are indeed taught to feed only from hands wearing a specific color glove, purple as I recall in the case study, to help prevent 'feeding accidents'. Equipped with this scientific fact, Chelsea could have indeed trained her giant carnivorous lizard NOT to eat women wearing red clothing. It only confirms the old adage that "truth is sometimes stranger than fiction". Thanks again to both author and illustrator for this excellent combination of artistic and writing skill!

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report

Thanks!

That's pretty interesting, and while I'd love to claim it was intentional, I didn't know certain reptiles could actually be trained like that! Pretty cool. Of course, it would have made a bit more sense to train the giant lizard to ONLY eat things associated with a specific, uncommon color, like in the Komodo Dragon example you mentioned. Maybe this species it harder to train, and 'don't eat red' is the closest that can be reasonably achieved?

Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report

Well, this was fun! :D Those girls were understandably quite surprised at encountering a giant lizard indoors, and at being gobbled up without warning.

I also liked the casualness of Chelsy and Rose. And Chelsy's affection for her beloved pet!

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report

Thanks! It was certainly a treat to get to work on something short, simple, silly and fun! I should really do it more often.

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

I absolutely love this, especially the way the women are undressed in its mouth. It really fires the imagination about how that'd feel <3

I really like how you describe them slipping around against one another in the beast's belly, it's ever so erotic. That last little shriek from outside was a lovely little reminder of what was in store too~

I'm going to have to write a story with a lizard like this at some point, it's too good~

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report

Thank you!

I most certainly agree: the 'tongue'stripping', as well as the squishy internal scenes are very appealing to me.

Very pleased to hear this may have inspired you towards some lizard shenanigans of your own - I consider it the very best sort of compliment, if something I made has inspired another! :D

Posted by longwayofftiff 5 years ago Report

I have to second BunnyWrites on the slipperiness and the slime inside and sliding all against one another. Also the auditory descriptive elements. The classic Prinny we know and love.

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report

Thanks! I very much agree, crowded internal scenes are some of my favorites.

I'm glad you noticed the auditory descriptions, too! It's been said that describing senses other than sight vastly increases the vividness of writing, so I try to include it wherever I can.

Posted by 3l33thax0r 5 years ago Report

Invitation: “Wear something pink or red.”
Snacks-to-be: *wears something else*
*get eaten*
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Seriously, another great story from you!

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report

Thanks a bunch!

Haha, well, they probably didn't expect that violating the dress code could have consequences quite THAT severe. At least they learned their lesson now, though. xD

Posted by Slimshod 5 years ago Report

This was a fun story, I liked the concept a lot. You had a lot of good detail and the character dialogue seemed pretty natural.

One thing that kept catching my attention was the lack of spacial awareness the story seemed to have. Girls were moving across space or happened to be much closer to the reptile than the story conveyed.

The description of the reptile had some details that were missing that would have helped paint a better picture of the creature and still keep it loose. It seemed like it was an alligator of some sort but then it reached for the girl's heads all of a sudden, which created a disjointed picture in my head. I may have been reading too quickly so I'll go over it again to see if I missed anything.

Otherwise good stuff. I look forward to browsing your gallery.

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed overall.

The issues you point out are probably at least partly because this story is based on a picture (linked in the description), and I might have been unconsciously assuming everyone had the same clear visual that picture provides, in terms of the spacial situation and the size/shape of the lizard. Thabnks for pointing it out though, I'll try and keep an eye on that the next time I do an illustration-story.

Posted by VictorBound 5 years ago Report

This was quite the delectable story!