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A tale of the dragon-girl Amellazia.
She was first created by Karbo who drew her here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/214230 .
It was PrinnyDood-Abides, though, who then named her and developed her further, by writing a story about her: https://aryion.com/g4/view/263847 . A belated happy birthday to you, Prinny! :)
Both that first picture and that first story established her taste for eating princesses, and it’s been a recurrent theme in subsequent stories:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/275687
https://aryion.com/g4/view/396527
https://aryion.com/g4/view/519771
Edit: Nalzindar has now drawn this absolutely lovely picture to illustrate this story:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/555057 .
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Posted by Kasra 5 years ago Report
Very nice story! I love how much of a lover-of-royalty Amellazia is, both in terms of palate and in terms of just admiration. It's a really fun combination.
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Thank you! It's fun to write about, too. :D
Posted by Soloplayer 5 years ago Report
What a delightful story, you never fail to amaze! Also does this mean we will not see Amellazia eat Wilenni?
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
We might. I've left it open for now, so that a future story can potentially cover it.
Posted by Soloplayer 5 years ago Report
That’s great to hear! I look forward to your next one!
Posted by Soroxas77 5 years ago Report
I do look forward to reading about how it happens.
Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
What a great story, I highly enjoyed the dynamics and interaction between Amellazia and the people she encountered, especially with the princess. It was well written and quite interesting, and Amellazilla's admiration of human crafts was also something to think about, she seems a bit deeper in this story than in others that I have seen about her.
As for my part, I hope Wilenni got away, she strike me as a character who can be used in other settings as well. The princess seems smart and balanced enough to take care of herself when necessary, calm and bold enough even when meeting a princess-devouring dragon^^
Nice touch of having the dragon-girl travel to Felarya at the end as your tale give her a nice background story for why going there.
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Thank you very much! I wanted, indeed, to leave open the possibility that Wilenni evaded her voracious 'fan' in the end, while also suggesting implicitly that Amellazia *did* eat her up. Prinny has said he may one day write how that last encounter between them went, and if so I'll discover what actually happened. ;)
As for Amellazia, my perception of her is that, in addition to finding princesses delicious, she is in fact interested in how they live their lives, and she's interested in human arts and crafts in general. We see here that she positively admires Wilenni (while also wanting very much to savour her and then swallow her down!), and I had fun imagining her having an in-depth knowledge of the genealogy of royal and aristocratic lineages. She keeps track (more or less) of the various princesses, countesses and duke's daughters she's eaten!
Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
Thanks yourself for writing this and for expanding many of the Felarya characters ;P
I have long wanted to draw one of Karbo's characters and see how it will go with my manga style,do you think it would be OK if I made a picture of Amellazia and Wilenni at some point if the opportunity should arise?
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
That would be lovely, yes! And Karbo definitely wouldn't mind, as long as he's credited. I'd be delighted to see the result. :)
Posted by Ixtili 5 years ago Report
On the one hand Amellazia's obsession with Wilenni really does it for the Fatal Romantic in me. On the other hand the thought that Wilenni is the princess she let's get away does it for the General Romantic in me.
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
That's a nice way of seeing it. I would agree: I'd be quite happy if Amellazia caught and ate her much-wanted treat, savouring every moment as she sloshed that smoothly delicious princess in her mouth and then swallowed her down; but I'd also be quite happy if, out of respect and admiration for her, she let her go. Still, I'm not sure she'd be able to resist eating such a wonderfully tempting catch!
Posted by Umhuebr 3 years ago Report
This was such a fantastic tale! Amazingly written, as per usual for your stories, but this one was also very refreshing! Amellazia is a great character, and her personality is pretty unique. It was great to see her standing firm in her perspective that humans are food, but also staying true to her word, and treating royals and aristocrats with due respect, even if she ate them in the end. It was a delightful surprise to see that Princess Wilenni was actually spared in the end, and this is something I didn't ever think I'd say in vore media.
Amellazia's morals and view of the world, such as her confusion about republics and monarchs losing their titles, added quite a lot of life to her character. Once more, bravo! Fantastic story, certainly one of the best out there! Not only as a vore tale, but as a fantasy tale. This is a great example of one that truly works in both ways.
Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report
Thank you very much! That's what I hoped it would be: an enjoyable fantasy tale and vore tale all at once. It's not very often we see a pred who's fascinated and filled with respectful admiration for her intended prey... but still wants to eat her up, because she looks delicious. At some point, Prinny may write a continuation / conclusion to their encounter.
Posted by Umhuebr 3 years ago Report
Hope that Prinny goes for it! It'd be great to see! And yeah, preds with genuine respect and admiration for those whom are usually food for them are most rare, but definitely cool to see when done correctly, such as here!