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Tags: aultcray melromarc xxxii Belch Belly bulge Belly rubs Burp Demi-Human Demi-human pred Digestion escape attempt Execution Execution by vore F/F Fatal Filo Filolial Human Prey Inexperienced Pred justice malty s melromarc massage Melty q Melromarc mirellia q melromarc naofumi iwatani Oral Vore Potbelly Princess Raphtalia Same Size Soft Vore Stomach Swallowing teasing The Rising of the Shield Hero Unwilling Prey Weight Gain Willing Pred
Judgement is well under way & after a heated debate, Princess Malty is sentenced to death & by the Queen’s orders, she requests the Shield Hero’s Sword, Raphtalia to deliver the execution. However, she leaves the details of it hazy, leaving the half-raccoon wondering what method would be used.
The details are made clear after Princess Melty is told to tag along, to help Raphtalia deliver justice to not just her own kind, but to the whole kingdom…
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Alrighty, my first non-FE story, & what a lengthy piece this ended up being, clocking in at 9.3K words & landing as my 2nd longest story as of now. I’m eager to see what others think of my first stab at a story not based on Fire Emblem. I feel very pleased with this myself, but the answer lies in what you guys think, so please let me know!
If it wasn't clear, this is an alternate take on the main story for Episode 21. Despite the rather dark undertone of the first scene, I sprinkled in some fun from Filo in there. I certainly had a ton of fun writing this one, not just because Malty deserves everything she got both in the Anime & in this story, but just the characters in general are super fun to write, especially Filo & Raphtalia~! I believe I’m actually the first person to write a story with Raphtalia as the predator…
I have to ask how, like really.
Anyways, I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I had fun writing it~!
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& of course, the visual representation for the star of the show~:
Raphtalia: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/the-rising-of-the-shield-hero/images/9/95/Raphtalia_Anime.png/revision/latest?cb=20190505005110
& the other characters who appeared in this story~:
Myne/Malty: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/the-rising-of-the-shield-hero/images/c/c2/Malty_Anime.png/revision/latest?cb=20181210092721
Melty: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/the-rising-of-the-shield-hero/images/b/ba/Melty_Anime.png/revision/latest?cb=20181111113202
Filo: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/the-rising-of-the-shield-hero/images/7/7b/Filo_Anime.png/revision/latest?cb=20181111113059
Naofumi: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/the-rising-of-the-shield-hero/images/2/2a/Naofumi_Anime.png/revision/latest?cb=20181111114915
King Aultcray: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/the-rising-of-the-shield-hero/images/9/9f/Aultcray_Default.png/revision/latest?cb=20181210092807
Queen Mirellia: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/the-rising-of-the-shield-hero/images/4/4a/Mirelia_Anime.png/revision/latest?cb=20190314082550
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Posted by Gunbot1333 5 years ago Report
This was nice. I only wish Filo also had a belly. I am sure Melty would have rubbed it for hours. Their needs to be vore art of Filo.
Posted by SupremeToadLord 5 years ago Report
Mmm, if I were to ever do an alternate vision of this, it could instead follow Filo & see how this all went her... Hmm, that's an idea to keep in mind~
& yes, she certainly needs more art, the anime needs more art & stories in general!
Posted by Tastypred 5 years ago Report
I was actually just about to comment that, a Filo version would be awesome. As you say the anime needs more art and stories, especially after that scene early on with the bandits.
Posted by SupremeToadLord 5 years ago Report
Speak of the devil, I was talking to a good friend about that specific scene not long ago. That's definitely another "what if she actually gobbled them up" type of deal which I'm surprised hasn't been done yet in art & literature form!
Posted by Khalcifieron 5 years ago Report
As someone who enjoys your work, but doesn't play FE I must say, more like this would be great!
Posted by SupremeToadLord 5 years ago Report
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it! I definitely ,have more planned, especially for Shield Hero so I hope t look forwardto it~ :]
Posted by OhSevenTen 5 years ago Report
I am officially hooked on your stories! I absolutely adore your writing style and very much look forward to your future works as this one was great.
(Also there definitely does need to be more Raphtalia pred stuff. She deserves it!)
Posted by SupremeToadLord 5 years ago Report
Thank you so much for the praise!
(This definitely won't be the omly time best raccoon girl gets pred action from me~)
Posted by OhSevenTen 5 years ago Report
(Ooooh, can't wait!)
Posted by TryMeIke 5 years ago Report
love this. is it to much to ask that you also do vore stuff for fate franchise?
Posted by SupremeToadLord 5 years ago Report
Hmm, there's certainly a chance I could write a piece for Fate sometime in the future. There's two characters in particular that I really like so who knows?
Posted by No-One 5 years ago Report
I admit, when Melty pushed her hand into Raph's mouth partway through, I was kind of hoping Melty would get swallowed as well on reflex.
There's a sad lack of Melty-prey vore around the internet, which astonishes me, given her name. You'd think someone would jump on the chance to make it "true."
Posted by SupremeToadLord 5 years ago Report
It was a thought, but I didn't want to see Melty go too by accident, so I just left it as a bit of a tease by Raphtalia almost taking her~
But yeah, there should be more Melty prey stuff - heck she has a blooming relationship with an omnivorous bird that has repeatedly threatened to eat people. Something with Filo & Melty is certainly something I do have in mind though...~
Posted by Coolerer 3 years ago Report
There sertainly should be something after the scene wher Naofumi and Raphtalia thought that Filo ate Melty
Posted by DragonCZ 5 years ago Report
Just two words..... Thank you!
Posted by SupremeToadLord 5 years ago Report
No need for thank yous, I'm just giving the world what it needs... but I'll graciously take the thank you anyway! So thank you~
Posted by Dlcsavage 5 years ago Report
When are you going to do your next rising of the shield hero story ?
Posted by SupremeToadLord 5 years ago Report
Possibly soon. I'm not sure exactly when, but if I had to take a guess, February might be the earliest. We'll see though, plans can easily change.
Posted by biscuitman 5 years ago Report
I like this, and it made me realize the lack of rising of the shield hero stores or art, and hopefully we get felo pov.