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Vore Vignettes: Orphaned Scenes By marloweny -- Report

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As I slowly make progress on owed stories, I continue to mine the seemingly endless sequence of story fragments on my phone. Here's a bunch of stuff that was earmarked to maybe be the "payoff" of some other story, but never got used.

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Groblek

Posted by Groblek 5 years ago Report

Fun! And hey, your titles are better than the ones in my “misc scenes” file, where I was lazy and just used sequential numbers.

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 5 years ago Report

Well that’s an interesting read

AndAnotherOne

Posted by AndAnotherOne 5 years ago Report

not enough like the tummy ones

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Oh it's fun seeing a glimpse of your writing process with your WOMAN and OTHER WOMAN naming system. I always need a name and a mental image of a character before I can write anything about them. Although a few times I start with my own name and ex bf/gf's for the pred/prey and then search & replace afterwards.

RoboMax

Posted by RoboMax 5 years ago Report

All good scenarios, biased towards the last one for reasons. I also need ask you a question here soon.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report

Thanks!

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report

And by all means, ask when ready.

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 5 years ago Report

I can't decide which of the two doughy fragments I like better, and I keep trying to come up with a scenario where you could chain the two of them together into a single story. You'd probably have to get a third person involved, so that OTHER WOMAN is actually a different person from one fragment to the next. Ideally there would be a small third part as well, where the first woman absorbed would meet up with the doughy WOMAN on the inside, while the third woman was out there using her as a beanbag. That's where I imagine it going, anyway.

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 5 years ago Report

Swap WOMAN and OTHER WOMAN in my comment above, I should have double checked which was which before posting.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report

Glad you liked them. I don't know why, the molding/absorbing thing really got a hold of my brain for a while there. That would be an interesting idea, having the two tucked in people sort of chatting while a third relaxes on them.

crankzzz

Posted by crankzzz 5 years ago Report

I can't express how much I love this short!

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report

I'm glad you liked it!

crankzzz

Posted by crankzzz 5 years ago Report

Also wanted to add that I love this approach to casual vore and breast vore, big turn on to see prey not being happy with themselves, and finally being appreciated as a part of their predator.