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A young woman gets herself cooked by a trio of guys at the mall. Her mom shows up in the middle of it and takes attention away from her, much to her chagrin.
I've been into cooking/dolcett for a while now, and it hasn't been on here too much. Thought I'd rectify that with a short story and see how it went.
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Posted by TCC 4 years ago Report
Cute concept you got there. Really doubles down on the objectification angle; she's sacrificing her young, nubile body, her intelligence she honed through higher learning, and any chances for a long and happy future in order to give some random blokes a quick fuck and a single meal... And yet despite all that they can't be bothered to give her their full attention. Hell giving herself up didn't even fully satisfy then. I bet none of them even noticed when she slipped away~
Posted by Bellybook 4 years ago Report
I get the feeling that she's fantasized about this for so long that she's a little out of touch of the reality of feeding herself to some random, uncaring guys, which is part of the fun.
Posted by Genericcook 4 years ago Report
Very fun! Nice one for sure
Posted by Bellybook 4 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
This was literally perfect! I loved how she survived the cooking process, not enough of that with dolcett stuff!
Posted by Bellybook 4 years ago Report
Yeah, it tends to be more realistic/depersonalizing, because that's a lot of dolcett writer's style, but I think it's more fun for the victim to be alive to feel themselves being eaten away, piece by piece...and in this case, to get mad at her mom.
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
I think thats exactly what made this sexy to me, she was more focused on her mom than her own death lol.
Posted by immortalsane 4 years ago Report
Utterly delightful, and extremely well written! You have a talent, and i hope you'll be doing more stuff!
Posted by immortalsane 4 years ago Report
I misread your artist comment, and see you have a good chunk of work already! I look forward to reading that, and hope to see more cooking and dolcett stuff particularly, as it's a huge happy button of mine, and you're damn good at it!
Posted by Bellybook 4 years ago Report
I don't have a ton of it, as the mood doesn't always strike me and I think that cooking takes a bit longer to write, but they'll probably be some more of it in the future if you want to look out for that. ;)