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Mark and company find that skiing during a blizzard can be a dangerous hobby. Lucky for them, they find a cabin amidst the storm and take shelter with the occupants. As the cold begins to claim them, the owner of the cabin admits that she knows of a way to keep them warm. However, it may be a warmth from which they may never want to leave from.

Another commission for max123. Hope you all enjoy it too.

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Bobgodofallbobs

Posted by Bobgodofallbobs 4 years ago Report

Well good storry

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report

Thank you!

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 4 years ago Report

Oh, is this goung to be continued?

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report

Probably not. Though that all depends on how we feel later down the road.

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 4 years ago Report

OK. Then, in the end, what happened?

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report

They left him behind in order to protect themselves from any retaliation they might take against them for this unfortunate incident.

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 4 years ago Report

Then, his sister and girlfriend is also taken by them?

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report

That is correct

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 4 years ago Report

OK. Then, can he find them out?

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report

Probably not. That's not how these stories tend to go.

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 4 years ago Report

Then, if this is continued, what will happen?

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report

No idea, but it's very unlikely they'll get out.

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 4 years ago Report

OK. But, they even can't get a surgery?

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report

Not without risking everyone's lives

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 4 years ago Report

Then, I hope they can get a surgery to get them out successfully without anyone's death.

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 4 years ago Report

I'm confused about it.

WillingWombPrey

Posted by WillingWombPrey 4 years ago Report

I had honestly expected this to be another sequal to the, Extended Vacation, series.

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report

We're still hashing things out on that one.

Zeroglitch

Posted by Zeroglitch 4 years ago Report

Interesting story.

I kind of feel bad for the guy at the end of the story.

Kind of thought he might get unbirthed as well.

Or at least I was hoping he would lol.

And why did they run away and just abandon him like that?

max123

Posted by max123 4 years ago Report

Well were going for that but there was no room at the inn.

Also not sure just how it ended up

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report

Here's my take. Natalia didn't want this Mark guy knowing where they live, as she's supposed to be puffer protective. So they leave him behind so he can't follow or further harass them.

Zeroglitch

Posted by Zeroglitch 4 years ago Report

Since Mark seems to be able to sense his sister due to them being Twins and they're shared Bond.

He could most likely track her down and follow Natalia.

And perhaps try to save his sister and girlfriend?

Or perhaps being unbirthed as well?

Because he did not want to lose them would most likely be why.

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report

I wanted to leave it in the air as to whether he wanted to save or join them

Zeroglitch

Posted by Zeroglitch 4 years ago Report

Sounds like there's room for a sequel at some point.

And even a way for mark to find them.

Thank you for answering me.

Nightcrawler99

Posted by Nightcrawler99 4 years ago Report

Awesome story.
Personally, I think it would be interesting if Natalia is lying about the regression part and not being able to let them out
Just so she can enjoy the feeling of being pregnant and perhaps make some money on the side through online videos or maternity modeling.

momos

Posted by momos 4 years ago Report

Friend, you are very good at making Cuckold stories (Netorare). Have you ever thought of making a move in which the predator seduces, has sex devours all the women in a guy's mail? Like ... The mother, the sister, the cousin, the wife, and the daughter and even the best friend? I've already made a story like this, if you want inspiration, read here:

https://aryion.com/g4/view/564910