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Little Lamia in the Big City (REDUX) is a crowd-funded series to rewrite an old vore story I had written back in 2010 about a chubby pink naga who has to learn to live in a modern city.
This chapter was funded by radiogenicvore.
If you want to contribute to this story, send at least $60 USD to http://PayPal.me/JerTheAce/. Remember to include a note in your payment that says your username and what you're paying for! Otherwise your payment won't count!
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I'm getting on a roll writing these again! :o
Looks like I'm not stopping at chapter 100, either.
Posted by walkingbyself 4 years ago Report
Good the bitches Reign is over with. And I am not sorry for that pun. Now to see if this predatory streak of Kira's lasts. Or if it is just a blip on the radar.
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Posted by joeburp22181 4 years ago Report
That Kira seems to be getting pretty smart in her old age! Seeeeeee!
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Posted by PrismaticAria 4 years ago Report
This turn of events pleases me greatly.
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Posted by RG9812 4 years ago Report
I like this new Kira time for our little Naga to be the top snake of the food chain now
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Posted by Bellyl0ver 4 years ago Report
And thus the rivalry between Kira and Reigna ends. Also, Kira should reconsider losing the weight, it’ll attract more prey qnd intimidate more preds(except for the amateurs who are to arrogant, but they’ll end up adding to it in a second)
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Posted by Allard-Liao 4 years ago Report
Of course, if she turns all that weight into muscle...
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Posted by Gorgrath177 4 years ago Report
Kira is officially top of the food chain now! Honestly I’m still worried her room-mate will end up eating her sister when she visits though.
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Posted by Morphy 4 years ago Report
Everyone not Kira is potentially at risk of getting swallowed alive by Mithra, heh. Kira still has yet to impress on Mithra that you don't just eat others just because you're hungry. It's impolite and potentially illegal.
...but only if there's witnesses. >:)
Kinda surprised Mithra hasn't tried gratuitously pleasuring herself with Kira again like she did in chapter 75, or is the pink naga just too big now? Hmm. Sounds like a challenge.
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Posted by DetectiveJupiter 4 years ago Report
For real thoooo, like honestly, I’m really into this vetted version of Kira and all, but if she swallows Mithra that’s probably going to be past the point of no return for me.
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Posted by Aces 4 years ago Report
Yeah no Kira likes Mithra. The pale noodle will be fine.
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Posted by Silverwolf74 4 years ago Report
I wonder If Aiden can be brought back to life (because reformation is a thing in this universe) then will Kira get into trouble with the police because she spent over 6000 dollars of someone else’s money without there consent oh and she also stole his car.
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Posted by cloud8745 4 years ago Report
Wow, I'm surprised that Reign came back into the story again so quickly, and that her end was so unceremonious. Not disappointed, mind you, it was still a good chapter, I just assumed you had bigger plans for her.
Also, congrats at 100 chapters!
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Posted by Chugly 4 years ago Report
Considering how chonky Kira is getting I feel like a title change might be needed. It'd be fitting with her change in personality and reaching 100 chapters.
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Posted by Aces 4 years ago Report
I prefer the irony of it. :>
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Posted by Beefsalad 4 years ago Report
Good Chapter Ace And Congratulations On Breaking A Hundred.
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Posted by devilnaga 4 years ago Report
Congratulations on 100 chapters. I can't wait to see what people at Kira's work think of her new found predator body. I feel like i know a few seasoned preds that took it easy on her that migbt want to collect on thier investment. Or has Kira really grown into a true predator? I think she might still be over her head.
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Posted by Eboros 4 years ago Report
if she continues to eat like that, after a while, there will only be an elipse against a background of rocky or Bonnie Tyler music that can make her lose weight !!!!
As for Reign, I would have liked to see her a little more but ... on this one, she clearly looked for it !!!
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Posted by kibroman 4 years ago Report
It is absolutely wonderful.
I love this great novel.
I am a big fan of yours. This is the first character (shown in the drawings) to die (fiona is reformed and Leyla's whereabouts are unknown).
You do a great job, but there is only one thing that worries me.
Is this novel coming to an end or is this story going to get longer?
I would be very grateful if you answered me.
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Posted by Aces 4 years ago Report
Probably longer at this rate. People are interested in continuing to fund it so I'll probably keep doing this especially now that I have somewhat of a second wind.
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Posted by kibroman 4 years ago Report
okay
Thank you very much for answering me and I am very happy to hear that
I would have been sad if it was over now
I have recently registered and I can finally write to you about what a fantastic writer you are
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Posted by Manic_Maxwell 4 years ago Report
While I can't say Reign didn't deserve this, I do kind of wonder if Kira actually going through with it in this manner was really a good idea. She even admits earlier in the chapter to think about the situation with the mall's video cameras potentially posing a problem...but apparently doesn't consider that there's now footage of Reign going into the changing room and not coming out, and a witness who more than likely is going to have an easy time piecing together what happened? It sounds like Reign's family is one of means, so even if Reign herself is no longer an imminent threat, the evidence to charge Kira in her disappearance is going to be incredibly easy to come by.
On a more positive note, I'm looking forward to her return to work and her co-workers seeing such a drastic change, considering the condition they last saw her in. :P
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