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In this new story,, Noelle has finally had enough of Berdly, the frustrating know-it-all who makes her feel small. What cunning solution could she have to her problem? Hmmm...
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Posted by HisashiHinata 4 years ago Report
Woah! Didn't think I'd find Noelle vore! Love the story!
Posted by Pactborn 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoy! Thanks so much!
Posted by Twisty22 4 years ago Report
Is Noelle's mom actually the mayor of hometown? Somehow I missed that detail entirely.
Either way, super good story. You wrote the weight gain section above and beyond what most people do on here.
Posted by Pactborn 4 years ago Report
I believe she is based on my research (I haven't actually played Deltarune) but thank you so much for the kind words!
Posted by Badfurson 4 years ago Report
This story is an excellent companion to an awesome piece! I'm really glad you and Jack worked on these~
Posted by Pactborn 4 years ago Report
Thank you so much! Jack is a delight to work with so I hope I can compliment more of his fantastic work in the future~
Posted by Smoge16 4 years ago Report
Damn, this is some very nice stuff! Your usage of onomatopoeia in here is nothing short of excellent
Posted by Pactborn 4 years ago Report
Thank you~ I love onomatopoeias so I'm glad you appreciate them too!
Posted by YaBoiDIO 3 years ago Report
I'm honestly impressed. You nailed the characters damn well, Berdley especially, given the fact that he probably would want to save himself via a grade comparison.
I hope you keep up the stellar work. I'd love to see more Noelle content in the future.
Posted by Pactborn 3 years ago Report
Thank you very much, much appreciated <3
Posted by Pillowfloof 3 years ago Report
This aged well
Posted by Pactborn 3 years ago Report
What do you mean, sorry?
Posted by Pillowfloof 3 years ago Report
Noelle kills berdly in snowgrave
And voregrave exists
Posted by Pactborn 3 years ago Report
Ahhh right.