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William found out he's sharing a room with his old crush from high school. A few drinks and bad decision later, and his crush gets up close and personal with the goth girl of the dorm. Hope she likes her new room.
Another commission from max123
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Posted by theheadsn 4 years ago Report
Great story. Is this a one off or do you plan on continuing it? Would be interesting to see where this goes, love the helplessness
Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report
Depend on the commissioner
Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
Okay the implications towards the end likely mean greta will be gone too by the time they get back...
Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report
Tee hee!
That's all I'll say on that matter.
Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
Honestly i just feel sad for any guys in a story commissioned by Max now...
Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report
Honestly, same here. It's getting harder to read them. Writing them isn't an issue, but even reading some of the older ones just isn't as fun anymore.
Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
Yeah, it’s difficult
Posted by knonme21 4 years ago Report
At the least we know the score before reading the story by now just bassed off of who commissioned it. It's saved me some heartache at least.
Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
Yep but it’s unfortunate that most of the unbirth stories now are either fatal or ntr stuff... why can’t we just get a nice story with a happy ending instead of a lose everything you ever loved version
Posted by Whatisaname 4 years ago Report
You mean like from max? Or in general? Cause the NTR is mostly his thing.
Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
From max, or just more unbirth stuff in general, the other vore types have far more content story wise
Posted by knonme21 4 years ago Report
I don't mind the fatal stuff personally. But much as I have qualms with max the reason we have so many stories enough to give him this reputation with regards to NTR is because he's more or less the only person commissioning unbirth related stories.
Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
I don’t mind it either if it’s fatal it’s just most of the regression is ntr happening to good people and harming happy families instead of targeting those that are bad parents and fractured families and giving them a new chance at a happier life
Posted by nacuot 4 months ago Report
Honestly, max123's comms are alright sometimes (Belly Dreams in particular stands out), but once you read a couple it really just becomes
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Posted by Zeroglitch 4 years ago Report
Same i keep feeling sad for the guys in these stories. Maybe if the guys got unbirthed in the stories it wouldn't be so sad ? Just thinking?
Posted by Nightcrawler99 4 years ago Report
I want a sequel so bad!
I wanna see Ellacine get both William and Greta in the next part and leave with triplets in William’s car for the dorms to have a good night of fun!
Ellacine is doing this for a passing grade and to earn some good side money for things she wants but things don’t go quite as planned and she has a hard time keeping everyone from escaping while going about her everyday activities at the school!
Posted by Nightcrawler99 4 years ago Report
At least this is what I’d like to see.
I think unwilling entrapment for pleasure is amazing and needs to be done more often in stories!
Posted by Nightcrawler99 4 years ago Report
Alternate endings!
Posted by threk 4 years ago Report
Really enjoyed this.
Still not huge on regression itself, but the other tropes are all right up my alley, so nice work :)
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Been glancing at this story, and surprised I didn't favorited it. So I'm stuck with three thoughts.
A: Love this story, and how it went from induced amnesia/memory alteration, to sudden horror in realising where William's loves/friends are.
B: Wish there's a sequel to this, that is all.
C: At a stretch. I'd want to imagine Ellacine not just regressing people, but constantly unbirthing and entrapping them within her womb, as a constant hoarding?