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Big Belly on Campus By Whatisaname -- Report

Greta makes a new friend with the RA while William attempts to make since of what's happening around him. As everything starts to settle down, it turns out William's sisters have a few problems of their own.

Sequel to "New Wombmate" and commissioned by max123

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Destroyah23

Posted by Destroyah23 3 years ago Report

Initially when I read this story I was like "okay Will needs to f***in' lay hands on these chicks and beat the shit outta them"... but he ended up with a harem so I guess it was 80% win and 20% loss. Great Story, hope this continues

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 3 years ago Report

You know what they say, you either die a hero or live long enough to become the villain.

WillingWombPrey

Posted by WillingWombPrey 3 years ago Report

An' Will obviously became the villain in this scenario.

threk

Posted by threk 3 years ago Report

"You stole my highschool crush and lover from me, I can see her fighting for her life as she is unmade, I will never forgive you for the horror you force upon this innocent girl."

"What if I gave you a pregnant Harem?"

"Shiiiet, who's Patricia?"

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 3 years ago Report

To be fair, Braun had nothing to do with Patricia's disappearance. Ellacine is a natural unbirther. Braun's just her gynecologist.

Either way, still pretty funny.

threk

Posted by threk 3 years ago Report

True, although he does seem to be helping Will, er, come to terms with it, lol

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 3 years ago Report

That's for sure.

max123

Posted by max123 3 years ago Report

Anyone wondering thats it for this series and characters, but they might pop up in other stories later on.

ironman362

Posted by ironman362 11 months ago Report

I like William, he's got good main character energy

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 4 months ago Report

Reading this scenario again, getting definite incest vibes from Rebecca sleeping in the pile with the others on William

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 months ago Report

Yeah, I can see where that could be inferred. We intended to have William see the end results of Rebecca's actions, but he was kinda stuck there. Plus Rebecca herself grew attached to the 'pregnancies' so it was meant to show how far she'd fallen under the influence of the serum.

Shows the importance of having an outside view before you publish.

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 4 months ago Report

Meh, apparently incest is in season now with how popular that little brother sister game has been

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 months ago Report

The Coffin of Andy and Leyley, right? I hear that's just a bad ending. But of course horny folks be horny.