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Set in the Warhammer Fantasy universe, this story follows an elite contingent of female High Elf warriors under the command of the Everqueen Alarielle. They are charged with tracking down a warband of orks led by a mysterious and viciously cunning Warlord known as Sunderskull. The question must be asked, though, who is hunting whom?
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Posted by Scarlet 4 years ago Report
This was very good! Not even just as porn, but very good writing too!
Posted by Narrows 4 years ago Report
Appreciated, thanks for the comment! I enjoy erotica with a nice balance of plot and sexy stuff myself.
Posted by doomfister 4 years ago Report
Two stories in one week, and both were a treat :)
Posted by Narrows 4 years ago Report
Much appreciated, my friend. As usual it helps having a prolific colleague to be motivated by!
Posted by BeautifulBad9 4 years ago Report
even though I absolutely despise age of sigmar lore with a vengeance though the models are brilliant., I can always appreciate this stuff as it somehow makes it seem slightly better. I do apologise for the bias I prefer 40k
Posted by Narrows 4 years ago Report
I'm largely a 40k enthusiast myself, though I admit Total War: Warhammer may have helped warm me to the fantasy world just a bit. Still though, thanks for the comment!
Posted by BeautifulBad9 4 years ago Report
no problem. I just like to comment
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
I gotta say, you are SUCH an excellent writer. This was quite entertaining even outside of the vore-related aspects. Darker than the other stuff I've seen from you, but this IS Warhammer, after all.
While I'm mostly familiar with Warhammer from the Total War games . . . I must admit seeing Sisters of Avelorn running about in a setting populated with dragons, hydras, dinosaurs, squigs etc. has piqued my imagination down similar lines more than once.
Curious to see how this goes, if you continue.
Posted by Narrows 4 years ago Report
Thank you very much for the kind words, it's a big encouragement! Fantasy has always been a treasure trove of vore potential and I very much intend to continue with this story!
Posted by Stanku 4 years ago Report
Must say, this was clearly among the best stories I've read on this site - and not just in one way!
For one, you made me see the potential in Warhammer from the vorish perspective; it seems so obvious in hindsight how well Squigs for example work there. Second, your eloquent expressions and turns of phrase were a pleasure to roll on the tongue; the sort of language that wants to be read out loud. At times I feel the descriptions rambled somewhat, but you do know how to make a point as well, so I'll count bits those off as difference in personal preference. Not that I can blame anyone of excess verbosity anyhow...
Finally, the vore itself was of prime grade, truly a delight to take in from foreplay to the act itself. The teasing and insinuation especially shine here, although I do confess being a biased to the darker tones played out here. In short, can't wait to read next chapter, or your other stories at that!
Posted by Narrows 4 years ago Report
Thank you very much! This was a very encouraging comment and it was much appreciated. I do admit that I can be a bit indulgent and rambling in descriptions, I try to tighten it up where I notice it. I hope you like the future chapters, squigs get future opportunities to cut their teeth on some pouty elven maidens.
Posted by Stanku 4 years ago Report
Pouty elf girls and hungry monsters make a wonderful combo~.