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After a lifetime as a human pet among hungry anthros known as "pellis", you've finally been given permission to be eaten!
So of course, when your childhood vore-crush offers to give you a personal "graduation" into her family's toilet, how could you say no?
With some help from this flirty fox-girl, you'll finally become the bowel movement you were always meant to be... but maybe you two can act on your mutual attraction before it's time for the 'main event'. Will there be romance before dinnertime?~
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This is a little different than most of the things I write -- it started life as a shorter commission from thelustyargonian, which he did a wonderful job with.
I then expanded it significantly, rewrote the prose into my style, and adjusted Vicky's character. But the skeleton of the story's plot and dialog still is all his, thank you for the awesome raw material to work with! :) Go check out his page for more awesome work.
This is Vicky's newest scene, but it's certainly not her last. She's probably my favorite character to write, she's just such a fun contradiction of hedonistic and sweet to Jamie...
Vicky is the first pred that I ever wrote into this universe, and belongs to MarkusFreeman320 -- check out the awesome art that he's made for her, and give him some favorites!
https://aryion.com/g4/view/600394 and https://aryion.com/g4/view/540537, and his new art https://aryion.com/g4/view/639718!
The man is a fantastic artist and a great friend, he deserves all the adoration you can give him :3
This is another story in the Graduation universe, extending MarkusFreeman320's interactive story and
vixingirl's stories. The original Graduation game can be found here: https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=79&t=51509
Check out Vicky's other completed stories here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/562491 and https://aryion.com/g4/view/533960
Posted by YaBoiDIO 4 years ago Report
This was genuinely one of the best vore stories I've read. I really appreciate all the work you put into fleshing out the world around the story, and the more vorish aspects are far from disappointing. You've definitely earned my watch, and I can't wait for future content.
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
I'm so glad that this pushes the right buttons for you, this kind of feedback really makes me happy to hear! I've put in a lot of work exploring this universe with my cowriters, as well as trying to make the actual vore hot. Thank you for the watch, I hope that my future works push the same buttons for you -- have you read any of the other stories I've written in this universe?
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Posted by YaBoiDIO 4 years ago Report
As of recently, I've read a couple other stories and a bit of the lore behind Graduation. As I mentioned before, I love all the pieces of lore behind a story, and good world-building can engage a reader when added in correctly.
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you like this world enough to read some of the other stories -- which ones did you read? :D
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Posted by YaBoiDIO 4 years ago Report
This story, the feral AV story, the nature trail story, and both Anubis stories. All very well written, in my humble opinion. I love the idea of a society where humans and anthros live side by side, and it's honestly the focal point of my sona's own world.
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
Thank you! Yeah, those are all great scenes, I'm proud of them XD
Though I do need to do some reworks on the feral AV scene. I need to remove the creepy bull at the beginning :)
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Posted by Nikkidafox 4 years ago Report
It's always great to see you upload, your stories are always fun. That being said... can we expect an update on graduation like... ever?
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
Good things come to those who wait XD
Seriously, everyone who works on this project either has a day job, is in university, or both. We write this as a hobby, not as a day job, and we do it for free. We're working as fast as we reasonably can ;) Moreover, I have a few commissions as well, which I owe to the commissioners -- which occur IN this universe, and will probably add to the game, but aren't part of the demo and are thus delaying it.
The demo version will most likely contain 5 scenes. The writing is ~80% done for it, we're making progress. Though I'm stuck on the cow OV scene, just can't make it work quite right...
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Posted by Nikkidafox 4 years ago Report
I didn't want to sound like I was pushing you to rush it. It's just that I haven't heard any actual updates on development in a long while so I was wondering if it had just been abandoned.
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
I've put up a new blog post which should give a little clarity on what's next for this universe.
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Posted by MarkusFreeman320 4 years ago Report
Well, there's 200 pics in the works. 9 are done, so that just leaves... 191 pictures to go!
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
In your defense, MANY more than 9 are fully sketched, we're just waiting on linework and shading (our colorist hurt his hand, and is also super busy).
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Posted by vixingirl 4 years ago Report
Trust me when I say this to you all: These two are SUPER busy. They are doing the vore community a service.
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Posted by vixingirl 4 years ago Report
MMMMMph, great work ;3 <3.
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
I wrote it thinking of making pre-vore love to you~
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Posted by vixingirl 4 years ago Report
AWwwww that is sooo sweet :3 <3.
pre-vore love is like adding spice to a meal, and this one would be exactly what I would do to you. ;3
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
<333
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Posted by Dragon808tr 4 years ago Report
Ah, always a pleasure to read these, this one beong especially cute. Though, theres always something about stories like this i find a bit sad in a way. Not beacuse of vore, but probably a testament to your writing skill, as when movies do this, it hits me right in the feels like a canon ball. (Especially being woken up to a goodbye kiss after being with your owner so long...) Still a fun and cute read though!
I assume this will be a major ending to the Graduation game? It seems to hold a large amount of weight to it and the writing quality is certainly supreme! No rush on the game of course, as you already answered that you all are quite busy. Though, i definitely am interested in this universe and to see where it goes! Its really a good one and i hope you and your team can keep it around awhile. If nothing else it shows how good of friends you all are.
Eh, sorry. Got a bit off topic... but i hope you are all doing well is what i meant to say. Oh, by the way, do Pelis celebrate Halloween or other human holidays?
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
Ah, thank you, that's high praise!
The bittersweetness is definitely something I was trying to emphasize in this story, I like to make people sad-horny XD
Jokes aside, this is definitely a major ending. We wanted a long, proper ending with every character who knows you well -- Sarah, June, Vicky, etc. If a pelli has known you since childhood, it'll probably involve *some* flavor of bittersweet affectionate loving vore.
And we have no intention of stopping soon! Haha. We'll be working on this for years.
(I'm not sure on the holiday question, lemme ask the other co-creators!)
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Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
Gah I love the intimacy between preds and prey sometimes. It's something I've tried to work into RP a lot and seeing a story like this with it is just amazing.
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
Vicky always says that lunch tastes better when you get to know them first :3
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Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
My Mara character, well the version over on Twitter, would definitely agree. Especially when those little snacks are wearing collars and leashes like good little pets.
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
It's nice when food wears a leash -- you can keep them close by in case you get peckish, and then slurp down the leash like spaghetti!
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Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
One of my favorite teases is twirling around the collar of someone who I just scarfed on a finger with a still squirming belly then gesturing for another prey to come up~
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
Hehehe, I might steal that image :3 But I also love collars going all the way through a pred's bowels...
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Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report
That's also such a good image, especially caught on a prey's skull.
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Posted by Chudman 4 years ago Report
I literally only made an account, for all the years ive been here As an anon, just to say, this is the best, and i mean best vore fic out there, a bit lengthy? Yeah, sure, detailed? Fuck yes, romantic? 101% And the teasing~ the list goes on, and on, and on of everything right about this, i could probably wank to this, and it never get old, every word is seriously on the dot amazing. Everythjng just works so well together, my word good sir, never stop, this is a fucking piece of art. And i have to say, im excited for whats to come. Good fucking work my guy!
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
Thank you so much, that makes me extremely happy to hear! It's comments like these which make this writing worth doing, haha, thank you :D I'm so glad you liked it this much.
thelustyargonian here, since he was the co-writer/commissioned artist on this story in particular. Maybe he and I should collaborate again! :3
If there's anything you'd like to see in future stories which would make things even better, let me know and I'll see what I can do!
I'm also tagging
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Posted by Chudman 4 years ago Report
No problem dude, and I didn't know this was a collaboration project, needless to say, ya work well together!
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Posted by xvx17 4 years ago Report
I have no words, this is amazing. It would take me a long time to express how much I liked about this story. The conversations between characters are simply incredible and exciting
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
Thank you so much!! This story turned out great, mostly because of the emotional connection -- you're really rooting for Jamie to end up as fox-shit XD I'm so happy that it pushed all the right buttons for you...
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
(Also, your English is great! But I'm happy to talk in Spanish if it's easier for you.)
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Posted by xvx17 4 years ago Report
oh, si, la verdad me resulta mucho mas fácil hacer comentarios en español. De esta forma puedo expresarme mas fácilmente. Y estoy realmente muy feliz de volver a leer una de tus historias, ya me hacían falta, pero valió la pena esperar
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Posted by VorishHorish 4 years ago Report
This story is amazing! I loved it so much when reading it!
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
Hehe, thank you! I think it's one of my best, it plays with the confluence between love, romance, and fatal degrading vore XD
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
Check out
markusfreeman320's awesome new art piece for this story! https://aryion.com/g4/view/640382
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Posted by Thezion1111 4 years ago Report
I both love and hate this, all these stories are insanely well written and sexy as hell but i feel depressed as fuck once ive finished, so much so that ive had to create my own headcanon that the main character restarts his life from the beginning post each digestion just so i feel better
Anyway great job with all of these
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
I keep hearing that my stories are depressing and I'm just confused, haha -- it's very much not my intention when I'm writing. What about this depressed you?
(Still, I'm very glad that you find them insanely sexy and enjoyable to read, the sad aspects aside!)
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Posted by Thezion1111 4 years ago Report
Im not entirely certain, ive read plenty of stories with unwilling prey and haven't come away scarred but i think its its something about this being these characters sole want in life and the idea that they love their preds almost makes it tragic, like i said i had to come up with my own headcanon just so i wouldn't be mopey ????????
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Posted by Thezion1111 4 years ago Report
Best way i can describe it is sort of like watching a great movie with a sad ending, movie was brilliant but now im listening to depressing music while overthinking everything
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Posted by TheBread 4 months ago Report
Just found this story and loved it, thanks for creating such a banger, it was a crazy good read
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Posted by wolfSnack 4 months ago Report
I'm so glad you enjoyed it -- have you read any of the other stories in Graduation, or with Vicky?
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