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Pumpkin Patch Panic By Cuddlekins -- Report

Warning! This contains loli lewds, so beware!

Also, if you liked this story, please consider contributing to my Ko-fi! Every little bit helps!

Surprise! I do have a Spookymonth story!

A couple of young girls, bored by an otherwise not-scary corn maze, decide to hop a fence into a forbidden pumpkin patch. This leads to bad things for them.

I'll admit I kinda churned this out really quickly, so if it seems lackluster, then that's why. It's an off-schedule story, so I hope no one expects it to have the quality of my usual works o:

That said, I hope some of you find it enjoyable. I know I have some ?/F fans here watching me!

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TuckingFypo

Posted by TuckingFypo 4 years ago Report

Lets see if I can get a post without triple posting.

Anyways, this was a good suprise. Was not expecting another story for a while. As for your concern, it didnt seem rushed to me, just a short story being short as intended.

Also, yuri loli is always a pleasure to read. Seems like there are far less people posting loli stories of any kind after the loli-pacalypse.

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 4 years ago Report

Thanks o: Glad you think so o: And, yeah, it does seem kinda lacking lately, though I'm doing my best to fill the void with stories like these D:

Simplespectator

Posted by Simplespectator 4 years ago Report

‘A little guilty’ Yeah, maybe have a fence that 2 little girls can’t easily scale surrounding your super deadly plant. Just a thought. Wonderful writing as usual. Thank you kindly

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 4 years ago Report

Well, ya know, stuff like that costs money, and sometimes it pays off to be frugal, consequences notwithstanding. Anyway, thanks :D

anyonarex

Posted by anyonarex 4 years ago Report

very nice stuff, your halloween fare is always a real treat. :p

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 4 years ago Report

Thanks :D Glad you think so

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 4 years ago Report

Finally got around to reading it. Great work! Always end up being a big fan of your ?/F work!

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 4 years ago Report

Thank you :D Hopefully my next one will be a little bit sooner than later lol

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 4 years ago Report

Looking forward to it! Seriously, you do ?/F so well and tick almost every box I'm looking for when I want to read a story! Your build-ups are super on point! This one being no exception. As much as would've loved to read about both girls being gobbled up, you took an even better approach! Leaving the fate of Elle ambiguous while Dani put the pieces together worked really well to enhance the tension and fear aspect!

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 4 years ago Report

Yeah, I feel like tension and and fear is extra important for monstrous preds who can't tease or torment verbally, so I try to put it in whenever I can. o:

TCC

Posted by TCC 4 years ago Report

Yet another wonderfully erotic tale!

Gotta love it when two little cuties in a belly make the most of what little time they have left~!

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 4 years ago Report

Thanks :D Helps to keep the terrible thoughts of death at bay

PerilStories2020

Posted by PerilStories2020 4 years ago Report

Very nice! Been a fan of your ?/F work for quite some time. Hard to believe that you "just churned this out," it's more polished than anything I've yet written.

Really enjoy how Elle and Dani make sweet, sweet love in their final moments despite the pain of digestion. Friends to lovers yuri is justice, and the sweet, sweet tragedy of it only being realized in the young girl's final moments is just scrumptious.

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 4 years ago Report

lol, I mean I did give it a read-over to make sure it stood up o:

but yeah, I'm always nervous about mid-digestion sex scenes because I understand it can be hard to justify sometimes, but like... I guess I'm going for the idea that, in those last moments, instincts took over and they both just wanted some sort of escape from the pain. Still prolly not the most realistic thing, but eh.

PerilStories2020

Posted by PerilStories2020 4 years ago Report

Don't worry, you did the mid-digestion sex scene quite well! Came across a lot more naturally than they often do.

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 4 years ago Report

Woo, thanks :D

Death Incarnate

Posted by Death Incarnate 4 years ago Report

Great as always, especially their awkward and passion filled demise.

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 4 years ago Report

Thanks, awkward and passionate is best o: