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Zatanna hosts a game show where various superheroines have to escape vore-based peril...or be eaten alive. Raven, Starfire, Batgirl, and Supergirl are on the show today, and each has to escape their own, unique way of being eaten and digested alive. Not everyone is going to make it out alive...
A request (sort of) for HereticRAIDAA They've been throwing a bunch of DC comics requests my way now, and while this piece doesn't fall into any of those and might not be what they want tbh...well, at least one of the acts of vore was inspired by them. I guess that makes this count as a request? I don't know there aren't rules. The piece overall was inspired by their requests at any rate.
This piece was a good place to experiment, both with a focus on peril of vore to the same extent as the acts themselves and with trying to write the characters' dialogue, so if anyone has any specific thoughts on either of those elements I would love to hear them, because this was a unique piece in a lot of ways and I really want to know what people think.
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Posted by HereticRAIDAA 3 years ago Report
Hey, don’t worry about trying to follow the letter of each prompt/idea I send your way. Like I keep telling you, I’m just throwing shit at the wall and seeing what sticks.
I’m honestly glad to have inspired this piece. It’s really great! I love the fun vibe that seems to run through it.
Posted by Bellybook 3 years ago Report
I figured you'd be okay with it, but I felt like it was right on the line of being a request...but I felt like I wanted to mention it as such anyway because I figured you'd like it. Glad you did :)
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 3 years ago Report
At first I thought the snake was Martian Manhunter or Mis Martian but then when it was reveiled that Raven wanted it, it became clear that it was Beast boy.
Posted by Bellybook 3 years ago Report
Ooh, I didn't even think about that, I might've enjoyed having it be Miss Martian. But I wanted to give BB and Rae their happy ending, I'm a sucker for that romantic vore I guess
Posted by SuperheroFood 3 years ago Report
Seems like a fun concept. Wish it wasn't a one and done. And Zatanna had won. Would love to see an alternative version, and maybe a Marvel version.
Posted by SuperheroFood 3 years ago Report
I mean, don't get me wrong, it was fun and hot, and I'm big fan of the Pray turning the tables. It's just, in this case, I wish everything had gone according to plan for Zatanna.
Posted by Bellybook 3 years ago Report
I'm considering doing a Marvel one one of these days, but I'd probably use a different host and have things turn out differently. Did you want Zatanna to win becuase you like her character or is it just becuase you liked her plan?
Posted by SuperheroFood 3 years ago Report
Well, Unbrith (and Cock Vore) are the only forms of Vore I don't like, so it's mostly that. But I also find the idea of evil triumphing in this way very hot, and appropriate for Vore, and initially it felt like Zatanna going over to the dark side and joining forces with Harley Quinn, who makes a great Pred. An Evil Supergirl also makes a great Pred, and you kind of have that here, but I'd rather OG Supergirl end up being Zatanna's butt food, or a beautiful roast.
Posted by Bellybook 3 years ago Report
Gotcha Gotcha. I usually like everyone to be willing and stuff but I do get where you're coming from with the whole evil Zatanna thing. Thanks for the feedback, it's nice to know what does and doesn't work
Posted by SuperheroFood 3 years ago Report
Sorry for the late reply, I just wanted to point out, it's not really a case of what worked and what didn't work, but what worked for me. I'm sure others like that stuff, and you should do what you want, I was just expressing an opinion.
Posted by Bellybook 3 years ago Report
Yeah I get that, but I still find it really interesting to get an in-depth opinion
Posted by Swalloweredipus 3 years ago Report
Tbh, it seems as though this story was aimed at as many people as possible. Whilst usually this would be a bad thing due to confusion, lack of detail etc. But this particular story pulled it off admirably well. We'll done.
Posted by Bellybook 3 years ago Report
Aw, thanks! That's really nice of you to say. I do try to keep some things vague, although I mainly just write for me
Posted by Swalloweredipus 3 years ago Report
Just a little question, but will BB digest raven? I mean, it could end up sexily either way...
Posted by Bellybook 3 years ago Report
In my head he does, makes the peril more real, but it is left intentionally vague
Posted by NonBinaryFuta 3 years ago Report
Spoilers for anyone reading comments before finishing the story!
This was amazing! I love how eager Starfire was to get her ass and thighs cooked when she broke free, it was adorable! Yay for the lesbians! just the suggestion of eating CEOs made me cum like a dozen times with happy communist thoughts. Also did not expect the snake to be beast boy, it was a very pleasant surprise!