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A typical, uneventful day at a mad-science bioengineering lab goes awry when a sexy mercenary saboteur meets an underqualified lab-tech overseeing a strange, amorphous specimen. Shenanigans and vore ensue!
Part of a story-trade with Narrows, go check out his half: Pioneering Plays at Asterisms Laboratory
Also, check out the awesome illustration done by Nalzindar!!
Another pretty short one! It's nice to not have to worry about large-scale, multi-scene scenarios sometimes.
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Posted by Narrows 4 years ago Report
Michele Rodriguez has been cast as Mercenary Girl in my head - I thank you, PrinnyDood, for bringing this scenario to sexy, fun life!
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
Thanks! It was a lot of fun to work on!
I did wanna give 'Mercenary Girl' a proper name, but I just couldn't justify her introducing herself to Miriam. So 'Mercenary Girl' is what we got. xD
Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report
I do like a story that ends well. Miriam unexpectedly survived! :D And who wouldn't enjoy seeing a shapely bare bottom and wiggling legs, upturned and being eaten up?
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
Thanks! This was a fun piece to work on. I think I aught to have survivors more often, just because it helps keep the tension up a bit more.
Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report
Yet another funny little one shot with the newest development in the world of mad science. I presume Miriam got her curiosity regarding this mysterious creature, satisfied well beyond comfort.
I agree with French_snack above when he say it is unusual to see a survivor from your stories, but I don't mind at all since it add some variety to it^^
I found this just as sexy as well, and the mercenary woman was a nice victim of this, too bad for her that she didn't manage to destroy her target before the target destroyed her. I will also add that I really enjoyed seeing the clothes and equipment being spat out at the end :3
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
Thanks!
I agree: the occasional survivor is good, because it keeps things from being TOO predictable, even if the odds are pretty stacked in favor of the predators, in my fiction. xP
Posted by longwayofftiff 4 years ago Report
Yes I did like the indigestible parts remaining too!
Posted by longwayofftiff 4 years ago Report
Hehe was a fun read! Always be prepared to face gelatinous critters!! You can never be too prepared, that’s what Burt Gummer taught me.
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
Thanks!
Blobby creatures are such fun, and probably tougher to exterminate than the typical predator: a creature with no vital organs definitely demands more specialized equipment than something like a big hungry land-octopus. xD
Posted by Guzzlordian 4 years ago Report
Nice! Might you do a follow-up story where Miriam also gets vored? She sounds like an absolute snacc!
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
Thanks!
No guarantees, but it's certainly not outside the realm of possibility, seeing as I have been tempted to write a little followup to this one. :D
Posted by Guzzlordian 4 years ago Report
Awesome! Thanks
Posted by Guzzlord1an 1 year ago Report
Well, I'd be super happy if a follow-up happens!
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Oh wow, I guess it's been 3 years since I was pondering a follow-up to this. xD
Obviously nothing came of that yet, but never say never, I guess! And I could definitely stand to showcase more amorphous, blob-type predators.
Posted by Guzzlord1an 1 year ago Report
Thanks! And hope Miriam shows up, I do like mousy, dutiful, soft-spoken sciency girls.