Posted by DrakentheBlack 4 years ago Report

Nice reference to the previous part.

I must say the moral of this series truly is to not make fun of hungry creatures that can eat you for the fun of it!

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks!

Yeah, dragon-teasing is a pretty dangerous game, but it seems like overconfident enchantresses are always keen to try their hands at it. xD

Posted by Randomdude5 4 years ago Report

I loved how the pred was transparent.

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm glad the transparent predator shtick worked - see-through stomachs are a recent addition to my list of favorite themes. x3

Posted by MrSaigneur 4 years ago Report

Awesome work, as always with this serie. Bonus point for the transparent predator. You really give nice description making it graphic to my mind.

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks a bunch!

I've grown to like that see-through stomach thing quite a bit lately, so I'm pleased it worked out in this case! :D

Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report

Loved this story. In particular, the idea of an invisible predator where you can see the prey inside his belly? Brilliant concept. I can't wait to see more of this series (and continue my own riff on it as well)!

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thank you!

I have grown rather fond of the see-through stomach gimmick lately, so I'm pleased to hear it worked out! Was a little afraid it might distract too much from the central dragon-vore themes, but people seem to liked it so far.

Should be at least a couple more installments to this, (including the BIG finale), though I'm still uncertain about exactly how to do the remaining teasing/back-and-forth scenarios. We'll have to see!

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Greatly looking forward to the continuation of Outfoxed, too!

Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report

Haha, why is it such that when you call somebody and are in a hurry to get through, it turns out that said person is busy elsewhere XD

I love this series, polite dragons and hopelessly rude women in questionable attire/positions!
I was able to figure out pretty fast what was happening when Ophelia saw her naked underlings in such a cramped position, despite levitating, and it was fantastic. The transparent trick was awesome : )
I am looking forward to see what you come up with next time, and if anyone at all from this school/university complex has the brain to see if being polite actually works against your voracious dragons.

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

I know, right? Just when they needed her most, Celeste was completely caught up wiggling around, without consideration for anyone's situation but her own. xD

Thanks, I'm glad you like this continuation! The see-through predator trick was a fun twist to write, and seems pretty well-received too.

At least a couple more parts to go, including the big finale, so there's more naughty-sorceress vs. dragon on the way. Eventually.

Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report

Lots of fun in this one! The dragon makes good points, when he suggests the delicious maidens might not want to make a "might makes right" argument just now, or that Ophelia might in fact not be an enchantress worth preserving for her sharp mind after all.

Though he didn't really stop to consider whether some of the eleven other digested ladies may have been brilliant minds worthy of saving... And now he'll never know! :p Still, it's good of him to occasionally value "talented, scholarly maidens" as something other than a luscious treat!

The dragon's introduction was nicely done and suspenseful, the invisible presence soon replaced with what he actually looks like. And of course we readers feel a lot more concerned for the enchantresses than they do themselves! Their illusion defence is neat, and the invisible dragon's feeding scenes were particularly nice. Not forgetting Beatrice squeezed between a pair of nice round bottoms!

To be fair to Ophelia, she also has a point when she says people don't learn much from being eaten! :p

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks!

Somehow I have the feeling the dragon was fairly certain those ladies would refuse his offer. Clearly the best way to 'outwit' him would have been to simply call that 'bluff', and thus leave him honor-bound to uphold his end of the offer. A respectable dragon will never break their word . . . but does sometimes make offers they don't expect they will ever have to make good on. xD

I'm glad you liked the invisible-vore (a new genre?!) bits, which were fun to work on indeed!

Posted by WebpagesAreTrees 4 years ago Report

This is pretty much a perfect vore story as far as I can reckon. The set up to the vore scenes is incredible, the mistaken "Mmm's!" were a fantastic touch that immediately got my heart racing, combined with the creative, sometimes-invisible predator, it all made for an extremely gratifying story to read. Ever since Invisible Lunch I've been fascinated by the idea of a see-through (But not gelatinous, slimes are kind of off-putting IMO) predator, and giving that quality to a draconic creature made the story an instant classic for me.

The only thing that disappointed me, was there was no section at the end with the Lindwrym reflecting on his belly full of conquered maidens. His see-through skin was a great opportunity for giving the squirming bulges in his body a few parting quips before he curls up for a leisurely digestion, or a third-person descriptions of his final bloated countenance. I'm a sucker for that stuff, personally.

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks! It was definitely a fun chapter to work on! I agree that the translucent predator is a really fun gimmick, and one I'll probably revisit in some form in the future.

Yeah, this one probably could have used a 'closing scene' as you described, not sure how I left that out. Of course, this being part of a larger series, it's not too late to revisit the various stuffed predators at end. ;3

Posted by DragonLover66 4 years ago Report

I really want a sequel to this story I loved this story. In particular, the idea of an invisible predator where you can see the prey inside his belly? Brilliant concept. I can't wait to see more of this series. I love this series, polite dragons and hopelessly rude women in questionable attire/positions! This story was great and almost completely perfect except for the one thing mentioned below.

The only thing that disappointed me, was there was no section at the end with the Lindwrym reflecting on his belly full of conquered maidens. His see-through skin was a great opportunity for giving the squirming bulges in his body a few parting quips before he curls up for a leisurely digestion, or a third-person descriptions of his final bloated countenance. I'm a sucker for that stuff, personally.

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Uhhh, not to be rude, but . . . are you a robot? XD

I ask because . . . I can't help but notice the body of your comment seems to be mostly pieced together from bits of other comments on this story. Not that I have any beef with our future robotic overlords, of course, just curious. ;P

Posted by DragonLover66 4 years ago Report

No I am a real person and huge fan please take what I said into consideration.

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Don't worry, I'm mostly just teasing. I always take comments into consideration.

Posted by Slimshod 4 years ago Report

As others have said already, the imagery of those naked girls sliding down an invisible throat was fantastic. That was a very fun sequence to imagine~

I felt like there could have been more hints to the dragon's previous encounters. I get that he doesn't like to brag but there were a number of opportunities here to reference them, even if just casually. I think that would have made this feel a bit more integrated with the series as a whole. But still, the reference you did make was a good one.

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks a bunch! Glad so many folks enjoyed the invisible-vore. x3

This was actually supposed to be a different dragon from the previous chapters, since quite a few are arriving at the sorceress-school, though perhaps I didn't make that very clear? Maybe that's what happens when I'm too lazy to actually name the dragons. xD

Posted by Slimshod 4 years ago Report

Oooohhhh gotcha, that makes a bit more sense now. I thought it was the same dragon with different nifty abilities.

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Very understandable, since (as I mentioned) I've just been calling them all 'dragon' so far, and the first 3-ish installments WERE all the same dragon. xD

If I'm gonna introduce a 'rainbow' of dragons here, I really need to start properly naming them.