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Carla,  SenpaiVore's Carla that is from Carla's curious courtship is running one of her unique campaigns. When your character gets melted so do you! And if you don't get resurrected in the game you don't in real life either! But if you can beat her big bad evil person in the end you get to do whatever you like with Carla!

So will the party have their way with Carla? Or will Carla wipe the party, and wipe them again in the bathroom?

A commission by  SenpaiVore

Carla is one of my favorite OCs to write. And I feel like this one really got knocked out of the park.

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doomed

Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report

i wonder who would win a match between gabby from https://aryion.com/g4/view/530844

and carla

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 4 years ago Report

Depends on who is DM. Carla makes challenging encounters but none are unfair technically. She's just a clever player and DM. Gabby though she'll use whatever technicality she can and rules lawyer to win if she has to. Most DMs wouldn't let some of Gabby's shenanigans go.

Fair DM? Carla. If Gabby could seduce the DM though...

doomed

Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report

valid point , although while gabby is a con and a cheat , it seems more likely that the people who play with carla would let a person get eaten , at least more likely than gabby"s group since they all know to avoid it with gabby

SenpaiVore

Posted by SenpaiVore 4 years ago Report

Anyone smell Crossover? owo

doomed

Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report

i think i just smell carlas farts .
id love if there was a sequel to this. i love carla, and i wish i had her in my universe XD

SenpaiVore

Posted by SenpaiVore 4 years ago Report

How so?

doomed

Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report

i love carla , with her domineering , semi cruel, but playful personality . she would be the perfect pred for the universe i created as well as the perfect foil for the first character i created on.

SenpaiVore

Posted by SenpaiVore 4 years ago Report

You did an amazing job as always and I'm flattered that Carla is one of your OCs to write.

Godeater

Posted by Godeater 4 years ago Report

What a fantastic story I was always on the edge of my seat never knowing who would go next.

I very much like Carla she played and fit the role of the master mind pred planning to get her meals perfectly. Though my favourite has to be Bianca Dom couger pred that shows no mercy definitely one of my favourites.

Excellent job and we'll written congrats on this master piece.

SenpaiVore

Posted by SenpaiVore 4 years ago Report

I'm sure Carla would appreciate the compliment. I myself try to be the best DM I can be. Though I do enjoy giving players the same Vorish risks. Also, totally agree about Bianca.

Moonsniper

Posted by Moonsniper 4 years ago Report

I would love to see what would have happened in the forest if that girl didn’t wake up so they get party wiped

SenpaiVore

Posted by SenpaiVore 4 years ago Report

Carla would have been one full Gal. Though that would only happen if no one was keeping watch. Probably lead to a vorgy though.

Spur

Posted by Spur 4 years ago Report

>“Me? Wow I didn't know you thought that much of me!” Carla said in surprise.

>“I've always thought Asians were good people!” Bianca said and Carla struggled not to cringe.

Laughed my ass off dude. Great follow up on her earlier beliefs and statements.

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 4 years ago Report

Bianca is a manager calling "Christian" Karen in all reality, these are just her good days.

And for some reason the Karen winning is sort of hot...

SenpaiVore

Posted by SenpaiVore 4 years ago Report

I'd have to agree with that statement.

Anastasia_Frostbite

Posted by Anastasia_Frostbite 4 years ago Report

Honestly was kind of wanting to see Bianca sloshed at the end because of her stereotyping of others but was hot as hell seeing her slosh her own son like that.

Also loved the CTF scene that was super hot and would love to see more of that from you

SenpaiVore

Posted by SenpaiVore 4 years ago Report

We will have to wait and see. I'm sure this won't be the last we see of Bianca. Maybe she will learn her lesson or not...or end up Jizz.

Racnaris57

Posted by Racnaris57 4 years ago Report

I hope there's a chance for more stories with these characters in the future.

Sira

Posted by Sira 4 years ago Report

Oh gosh, you've really outdone yourself this time. I wish I could play at such a table!

SenpaiVore

Posted by SenpaiVore 4 years ago Report

You are always welcome, though can't guarantee you will be solid by the end of the session.

firefox01

Posted by firefox01 4 years ago Report

that was seriously one of your best pieces, I couldn't stop, I had to finish the story, absolutely excellent work!

Cadence

Posted by Cadence 4 years ago Report

That was an incredible read. It delivered several times over.

Quicksilvrr

Posted by Quicksilvrr 4 years ago Report

I like the idea of the story and the story itself since I saw it quite a while ago with Gabby, but personally I'm not a big fan of bianca as the pred who came out on top, I'm more of the type of person who enjoys the young pred getting the old, I like the ambiguous ending though so I can atleast imagine a world where bianca loses the bet and Carla continues to terrorise her D&D buddies or whatever's left of them, but that's just my opinion, wonderfully written as always though

firefox01

Posted by firefox01 3 years ago Report

id love to see a version of this where reforming is normal and common, so they just accept half of them wont leave solid but its just normal, none of them want to get eaten, but they come back for more!

willofwii

Posted by willofwii 2 years ago Report

This was a fantastic read and it really bought so much flavor and background to Carla, even some nice character development to Bianca who was a real dark horse in this tale.

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 2 years ago Report

This is kind of my favorite one for Carla tbh. There's just a lot of things going on behind the smug demeanor that she can only express in a setting where she thinks she's in control and holds all the cards. DM'ing is therapy for her where she can put some of her fears onto the table and confront them in a low stakes situation. This was a defining moment in writing for me.

Smutreader

Posted by Smutreader 7 months ago Report

“Well Becky's DC 18 for escape makes it impossible for Liz to get out on her own since she has a -2 modifier."

But that's not true at all! Even though skill checks don't crit, a 20 would meet that 18!