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Cassie's freshman year in university is going to be a ton of fun with her good friend Tina as the RA for her floor. Assuming she can stay out of trouble...
I was inspired to write this dark little tale after reading
Drakeral's Party Time, check it out!
https://aryion.com/g4/view/670959
Special thanks to Nosuspicious for assisting with editing on this!
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Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
Lol There needs to be a sequel where Tina is eaten for abuse of power.
I love how she rationalizes murdering an innocent by thinking “ she did the right thing “
Posted by Ohgra 4 years ago Report
The whole "unreasonable pred" angle really works for me for some reason. Weird authoritarian rule of law stuff tempered with actual regret about having to enforce them on someone they care for is just *primo*
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
I figured after seeing your comments on the other story . Tho Tina didn’t seem like the she regretted it . This came more across as a truly uncaring pred who was merely inconvenienced
Posted by nosuspicious 4 years ago Report
I really like this one. You have such a good pred personality in Tina. I’m glad I could offer a little editing help here and there :)
Posted by Ohgra 4 years ago Report
Thanks again, I'm glad you enjoyed!
Posted by amerdism 4 years ago Report
That was dark to say the least
Posted by Ohgra 4 years ago Report
A little darkness can be a nice treat every once in a while!
Posted by amerdism 4 years ago Report
Your not wrong, but its rare to find a story that doesn't take the dark route, even rarer to find a gentle gts story of any kind. It's just nice to see a 'good' ending once in a while ya know
Posted by AnAccount 4 years ago Report
If you havent read "prevention punishment" by spaminacan on here I'd recommend it for not having a ""bad"" ending
Posted by Ohgra 4 years ago Report
I get you, I actually started writing because there was some hard to find content I never could find. Gentle GTS isn't really my bag, but I've got some happy ending stuff here and there; particularly The Challenge series and the happy ending option for the Kendra storyline.
Posted by Indighost 4 years ago Report
Nice story. I liked how there was a small risk of indigestion for the predator.
Posted by Ohgra 4 years ago Report
Hey thanks! I love the indigestion stuff, big fan of your work!
Posted by AnAccount 4 years ago Report
This was great, just wish she got to flex the whole deepthroat champion angle a little more, like if the other 2 were 6 inches and cassie was a foot
Posted by AnAccount 4 years ago Report
Also why are all of your college stories so fucking satisfying?
Posted by Ohgra 4 years ago Report
<3
Posted by Ohgra 4 years ago Report
They actually were bigger when I initially wrote it but ended up going back and shrinking them down a bit in the last pass.
Posted by Whereaminow27 4 years ago Report
Obviously she wans't actually her friend. Pitty they couldn't have fought and tina was the one who got strunken, or damaged ring enlarges cassie, and payback.
Posted by Ohgra 4 years ago Report
Eh true justice isn't a turn-on.