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Holy shit.
This thing.
It is so long.
I have been working on it for literally 2 years.
I wanted to make smaller chapters.
I tried.
If anyone has the slightest idea where this could be divided into 2 or 3 coherent pieces, please, tell me.
Also, in regards to the weirdness with Melody and Leah: I have double and triple proof-read their segments. Any inconsistencies in storytelling are deliberate, at least where those two are concerned.
I normally have a strong aversion to explaining things too soon, but I'm worried this time it might just be confusing and I don't know when I'll have the next chapter done.
Basically, Umbra yanked Melissa and Susan's minds out of their own heads and jammed them into Melody and Leah respectively, for the purpose of psychological torture. Melody and Leah are not aware of this. However, human minds are not built for this, and as the scene progresses and everything gets more heated, the minds of those involved are starting to break down and lose track of the distinction between one another. The whole thing will be explained fully in the next chapter; this is just a note for anyone who came out the end wondering what the fuck was going on.
This may be the most depraved thing I've ever written, though that may just be sheer length distorting my perceptions. It was fun to write though, even if it took me two years to work up the inspiration to finish.
Hope you like it.
PS: If anyone finds and hates the horrible horrible pun, you should be aware that I am actively feeding on your pain and rage
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Posted by grz01 4 years ago Report
The way you describe plant vore, makes it sound amazing - well done, another wonderful story, many thanks.
Posted by Eater99 4 years ago Report
I've very glad you enjoyed it :)
Posted by 20002000 4 years ago Report
You did a really good job with this one. Honestly I think you're really in your element when you're describing mass vore like this
Posted by Eater99 4 years ago Report
Thank you. Mass vore scenes are generally more work to do, so it's satisfying to know the effort pays off
Posted by NightRoller 3 years ago Report
Ah, it took me 2 and a half reads to understand exactly, but that "4th wall break" spanning two paragraphs was pretty good, got me to chuckle.
I feel too lazy and sleepy myself to talk much about the rest (oops, took too big of a whiff).
Posted by Eater99 3 years ago Report
I like me some obtuse humor
Posted by nomnomfap 3 years ago Report
Excellent story, love to see a return of this plant pred after Ann's presentation!
Posted by Eater99 3 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it! The femvore seems to be a particularly popular pred among my readers