For your first long-form comic, consisting of multiple pages, you did amazingly well. The character interactions were amusing on the first couple of pages, that Toriel had a specific outfit prepared was great and she had spare robes too. Your posing for all 8 pages has been great, the panels flow really smoothly. The internal on page 7 was nice, I think it was the first time I've seen you do an internal with a visible prey inside.
Also a wrestling match feels very much in-line with what Undyne would enjoy.
The real question is, what will she do when there’s nothing left to devour? Unless she can break the barrier then she’ll be trapped for eternity (with jerry, the temmie’s, bob and TAD) I doubt she ate the child, and if she gets to new home then she will be one human soul short of becoming the God-MILF and being free to consume the surface world (and presumably the rest of the universe along with it)
Well a monster can leave the barrier with just one soul on their own! So I see no reason why she couldn't just snag one (+5 for dessert) and excuse herself, there's no reason to worry about breaking the barrier if it's trapping nobody because there's nobody left!
Actually, a monster would have to have the power of a human soul to pass through the barrier on their own.
Guess she just has to claim the entire Underground for herself! (As if she wasn't planning on it already and the freedom to go to the surface is just an unintended bonus...)
Posted by ObsidianSphinx 3 years ago Report
Well that was a great sequence! Can't wait to see the other big bosses get bellied!
Posted by Undernom 3 years ago Report
Talk about a grand finale! There's a lot that I love about this saga; the poses, the lighting, the silliness of it all, all balanced perfectly!
Also, Toriel/Undyne is a very VERY nice pred/prey scenario to me. Great work as always~
Posted by Badfurson 3 years ago Report
Heck’uva show!
Posted by mibankai1171 3 years ago Report
Very nice comic ^_^
Posted by Luna2120 3 years ago Report
Excellent comic dude! Can't wait for what you do next with Tori!
Posted by balanced-guy 3 years ago Report
For your first long-form comic, consisting of multiple pages, you did amazingly well. The character interactions were amusing on the first couple of pages, that Toriel had a specific outfit prepared was great and she had spare robes too. Your posing for all 8 pages has been great, the panels flow really smoothly. The internal on page 7 was nice, I think it was the first time I've seen you do an internal with a visible prey inside.
Also a wrestling match feels very much in-line with what Undyne would enjoy.
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
a fight to the death undyne wasnt ready for
Posted by marcusthesmith 3 years ago Report
I saw this coming
Posted by NewSuperTrios 3 years ago Report
Congratulations, you're a prophet.
Posted by ChangelingKygunius 5 months ago Report
Heeey trios~ Mwah uwu
Posted by hidaraw147 3 years ago Report
All most there Just hotlands and asgore and she will have eaten everyone :)
Posted by RedBeard 3 years ago Report
I hope this continues soon, She’s so big, fat and lovable
Posted by SexInspector9000 3 years ago Report
The real question is, what will she do when there’s nothing left to devour? Unless she can break the barrier then she’ll be trapped for eternity (with jerry, the temmie’s, bob and TAD) I doubt she ate the child, and if she gets to new home then she will be one human soul short of becoming the God-MILF and being free to consume the surface world (and presumably the rest of the universe along with it)
Posted by Hookaloof 3 years ago Report
Well a monster can leave the barrier with just one soul on their own! So I see no reason why she couldn't just snag one (+5 for dessert) and excuse herself, there's no reason to worry about breaking the barrier if it's trapping nobody because there's nobody left!
Posted by SexInspector9000 3 years ago Report
Besides jerry, witch is a real testament to what kind of person he is if toriel doesn’t want to eat him!
Posted by SexInspector9000 3 years ago Report
Also seeing your toriel as a Thicc, big-bellied all-consuming goddess would be a good way to cap off the series, in my honest opinion.
Posted by Undernom 3 years ago Report
Actually, a monster would have to have the power of a human soul to pass through the barrier on their own.
Guess she just has to claim the entire Underground for herself! (As if she wasn't planning on it already and the freedom to go to the surface is just an unintended bonus...)