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Promises and trust are the backbone of relationships. Also, being alive, that's important too.
***SPOILERS IN TAGS AND DESCRIPTION***
This was a big one, and we've had it coming for a while now. We set this up 22 stories ago; that's over a 10-month gap in terms of writing time. From the moment he was introduced, we knew how he would end. Honestly, it's hard for me to 'end' characters unless I know I'm going to from the onset. I do wonder how obvious it was. Did you see it coming? Did you think it would be Ozzy instead? Or both of them? Were you totally blindsided?
To any and all the Zach fans: I offer my condolences, and I'm sure the Fiona fan club will happily make accommodations for you. Now that he'll be a part of her, it only follows that the fans should go along too, right?
Random side note, but I kinda love the fact that Arthur's plan was basically the same as Zach's, and that Zach and Ozzy didn't expect their attackers to be using the same strategy. I know I'm kinda patting myself on the back, considering I wrote it, but I still think it's a cool detail.
Oh, and here's the craziest part: this wasn't even the oldest or largest twist we have planned. This was the warm up. Co-creator x9comega and I have even bigger things coming pretty darn soon. And when they're ready, you'll find them along with the rest of our series right here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/569713
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Posted by Daduke 3 years ago Report
Mmmmm damn Jack loss a friend and kind of mentor *to* his friend. He's going to be in a hell of a slump if Ozzy gets that news to him.
Posted by Daduke 3 years ago Report
Caught me completely of guard btw. I thought maybe there would be a quick get away, a eat and release, or maybe human preds hunting Fi & Arthur.
Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 3 years ago Report
Human preds?
Are you sure you know the storyline?
Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report
I'd say he does. They're even mentioned in this very story. The ones who change their bodies with magic.
Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 3 years ago Report
Interesting. Here's to hope that Zach gets saved in time. If not... I hope Ozzy gets eaten soon as well.
Posted by MingauNight 3 years ago Report
Why? For him to be reunited with Zach in the other world or for Jack have no human friends anymore?
Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 3 years ago Report
To be reunited in the other world.
Posted by MingauNight 3 years ago Report
Let him stay a little more, at least until Jack makes more friends. hehehe
Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 3 years ago Report
It’s for the author’s to decide.
How, I get a feeling that Jack will get into a heated fight with Fiona, even if she didn’t know Zach is one of Jack’s friends.
Posted by x9comega 3 years ago Report
We've had Human preds before. One tried to eat Jack once even. And I beleive there was another in Detention, if memory serves.
Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 3 years ago Report
I see. Hopefully, Zach will be saved, just in case you guys change your mind of letting him die.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report
I tried to set it up so there were many ways it could plausibly turn out. Gotta keep my readers on their toes.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 3 years ago Report
To be hopeful he is not digested yet, so there a possibility ozzy tells Jack to rescue zack or Fiona puts the dots together on why he hesitated. Can Fiona listen to her prey if she puts her ear to a stomach, because I can see she asking why he hesitated if she realizes it not panic, or choice paralysis.
Posted by MingauNight 3 years ago Report
Hope Zach likes the other world, I have the feeling others will join him soon.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 3 years ago Report
The hopeful part of me is hoping he is just unconscious and after a talk with Jack, he will be taken to the nurse to recover.
I keep coming back to this fic even if it depressing, because it just that good, you have hooked my feels @theDragonBoy.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report
Well, I promise to balance the depressing with the wholesome and the uplifting. This was never intended to be a depressing story overall, we're just hitting a low point.
Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 3 years ago Report
I am probably not the only one who believes that Fiona will find out sooner or later that she ate Zach.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report
I was counting on the fact that no one would really remember at this point that Zach and Fiona had never really met- just like the characters themselves in the story. Glad you enjoyed it and I was able to make an impact.
Posted by 2Ron2R 3 years ago Report
Some one may have been taking note since last May and hoped that her seeing him at Jacks table would be enough. :(
Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report
Yup. Also, when they’re at lunch, there ARE other kids at their table, so Zach sort of blended in there. But mostly it’s down to her just not paying very close attention in that regard.
Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 3 years ago Report
What are the odds that Arthur lied to Fiona that he won't eat Ozzy, thus still doing it in a future chapter?
Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report
Notes!? I’m flattered :D
But, yeah, there are other kids at the table besides Zach who Jack *isn’t* friends with, so it’s not a given she could tell even if she had been paying closer attention.
Posted by 2Ron2R 3 years ago Report
Well 'taking note' not 'taking notes', no actual writing involved. Just to be sure, you do remember the PM I sent you on May 31?
It was always a vain hope of course. If one really pays attention though, they can tell who's interacting with one another. It's a moot point however as Fiona had her head in a cloud of hormones.
I wonder how Sarabeth will react to all of this.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report
Pfff! If only I could read half as well as I could write XD
Took another look at that PM. You totally called this from that start.
Posted by Perodian 3 years ago Report
Wow, dramatic irony. Bit of a dark twist there. It would be more dark if Arthur knew who she was killing.
Posted by 2Ron2R 3 years ago Report
I suspect Arthur knew *exactly* who both Zach and Ozzy were.
Posted by MingauNight 3 years ago Report
RIP Zach, you're in our hearts. I think Ozzy and Jack will be joining you soon, wherever you are now. Hehe
Sorry, I know I'm the kind of guy that thinks the characters I like go to some fine afterlife, sometimes I feel ashamed for being so much soft hearted.
Posted by x9comega 3 years ago Report
He’s in our hearts…well, maybe closer to Fiona’s heart than anyone else’s right now~
Posted by MingauNight 3 years ago Report
I think it's better Fiona be careful, bucause I think Arthur knew that they were Jack's friends and he is trying to get rid of them to isolate Jack and be free to start an abusive relationship with her. I don't know, but I really don't trust him, there is something really dark about him.
Posted by x9comega 3 years ago Report
I’ll just go ahead and say it, it’s not a spoiler or anything, Arthur doesn’t know any more than Fiona about Jack’s friends. He’s just hunting here.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report
IDK, if nothing else it's a good headcanon if we don't end up ruling it out in a story.
Posted by sadcat 3 years ago Report
shttt that's gonna be an interesting scene when Jack knows sheeee im kinda tense now lmao
Posted by Mechdragon1k 3 years ago Report
It is hard to lose zack.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 3 years ago Report
It hurts so much when authors kill of long running characters.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report
The author shares the pain, for the sake of the story.
Posted by Relius 3 years ago Report
Oh dear, poor Zack. May you go to a better place (Fiona's hips)
Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 3 years ago Report
I bet with you guys that Ozzy with go after Fiona while Arthur’s not watching and alert her that she ate Zach.
Posted by MingauNight 3 years ago Report
Fiona needs to open her eyes and see that is something wrong with Arthur. He looks like that guys who have abusive relationships with girlfriends.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report
Unfortunately, Fiona might be of the mindset to read that sentence, get starry-eyed at the "relationship" part and then totally miss the "abusive" part. (Whether or not that would actually be his intention.)
Posted by Wolfsage 3 years ago Report
Well, damn...
And I can't wait for those "Bigger thing" to come.
Posted by MingauNight 3 years ago Report
At least Zach didn't suffered much.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 3 years ago Report
This hit me in the feels hard enough to trigger my anxiety, please follow it up with something light hearted, through I suspect it going to be Jack finding out about this and becoming terrified of Fiona.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report
No spoilers, as I was planning to put a warning in the next story anyway, but the next one will not be light. It will be heavier in some ways. The one AFTER will be much lighter (and may even involve a certain werewolf pup). I'll be trying to upload them both without too much of a gap, so no one has to linger too long in the heavy zone.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 3 years ago Report
Maybe you can make a good end AU sometime where Jack gets Fiona to cough up zack.
Posted by magicboy13 3 years ago Report
Ohhhh boy fast updates! I'm already 3 chapters behind!!! And OMG Zach! Nooo!
Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report
Yup, busy weekend, lots to catch up on.
Posted by YepMcNope 3 years ago Report
While not having ever been expressly a Zach fan, I'm at least a little disappointed that there wasn't a bit more banter between him and Sarabeth. I liked their dynamic.
Ultimately though, for a mage who was only ever so skilled due to being able to remain calm and collected, it makes sense that this scenario would be his downfall. What a tragic, yet fitting outcome.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report
Having the relationship with Sarabeth cut short is just part of the tragity, alas. It was a fun dynamic.
Posted by ExtraUser 3 years ago Report
The visceral emotions of this chapter show that humans not smuggling shivs, household poisons, or other unkind objects with them everywhere they go makes little sense (aside from irl storytelling themes).
What does it matter if a human is branded a murderer for surviving a predator (or taking them down with them) and have a 99% chance of death after?
The alternative is certain death.
Posted by 1ring42 8 months ago Report
Oh no. Im really glad i didnt get too attached to zach but still... RIP