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Hi everyone ! Here's a new short story about a prey with a kind of watching kink !
I hope you will like this story and don't hesitate to give your opinion in comments or in PM to tell me what you liked or hated !
Warning: English is not my first language (although I'm getting by) so I wrote my story in my native language before I had it translated by Deepl, corrected with my knowledge and and having it proofread by the friendly https://aryion.com/g4/user/EloquentOrc
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Posted by Arbus1 3 years ago Report
This was a fun read ^^
Posted by 2good2btru 3 years ago Report
That's so hot, hopefully sophie gets to see more prey being swallowed before she's eaten herself.
Posted by BellyLover17 3 years ago Report
Great story! Hope you do a sequel that continues where this one left off.
Posted by voredrawing 3 years ago Report
Can’t wait for more stories to come!
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
Great concept and story , although Sophie is a horrible person lmao . I kinda wish that she was the one who got eaten .. well either her or the sales woman . Lol it would’ve been awesome to have the saleswoman get eaten by the preggo.
I kinda feel teased . You dangled a great milf in front of us at the end . But then dipped away . It was nice but given you don’t like to review previous characters , this kinda means we likely won’t know what happens to Sophia .
Either way it’s phenomenal as always
Posted by Hetzering 3 years ago Report
Glad you liked it!
For the ending, I made the choice to leave it open for the readers' imagination about Sophie. I felt that leaving it implied supported the " banal ", " casual " side of Vore in my stories.
But as I see that many are asking for an "official" version, I think I'll look into it in the future. I don't mind because I liked Sophie's character but it will take some time to avoid making the same mistakes I did for Jill's "ending".
Posted by TohruKobayashi 3 years ago Report
Sauce for the thumbnail?
Posted by Hetzering 3 years ago Report
4Chan, the chan /s/ (Sexy beautiful women). there are some threads with only views on butts.
Enjoy !
Posted by TohruKobayashi 3 years ago Report
Sadly couldn't find it after a good while of searching.
Posted by TohruKobayashi 3 years ago Report
Still can't find it. Even when searching by image I can't find it. Do you by chance have a link to it? I've been struggling to find it for days.
Posted by Hetzering 3 years ago Report
https://i.4cdn.org/s/1647364608556.jpg I found this link, the image was in the thread "cute face, fat ass". Unfortunately, there is no further information.
Posted by TohruKobayashi 3 years ago Report
It's perfect. Thank you very much.
Posted by Ryan-Drakel 3 years ago Report
Implied scat tag required.... ruined it for me.
Posted by rugli 2 years ago Report
I loved the premise of this story for most part, as I think its cool idea to have someone become a meal as payment for dress they just bought. Then they end up being eaten while dressed in that new dress.
There are few things that I think could have gone better. I think Shamia deserved more meals than just the one she got. It Sophie's cop out of becoming Shamia's meal is understandable as Shamia didn't propose to eat her when she proposed to eat Brook as payment. Far as Laura is concerned why wouldn't see want to watch Shamia eat Brook? I mean Brook is also her friend not just Sophies. As then we could have seen how that would have played into Laura's own emotions considering what happens in the second part of the story. Speaking of which I think its bit of waste to introduce the other saleswomen as preds and then not use it. Similarly with the pregnant pred of the street. When we know from the first part that Shamia would have been more than happy to eat Brook's friends as well. So I think would have made more sense if Shamia and the pregnant pred had been one and the same person. If that had been the case It would probably created why for Shamia to rope Sophie in as well. Considered that Sophie wriggled out of being eaten when Brook was eaten as she clearly wanted to watch Laura getting eaten.