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Hi ! Here is the first "short-story" while waiting for the next big story ! Which is coming with a little delay because of the COVID which nailed me to the bed.
This story is just about a mother who wants her grandchildren more than anything, at least in normal times.
I hope you will like this story and don't hesitate to give your opinion in comments or in PM to tell me what you liked or hated !
Warning: English is not my first language (although I'm getting by) so I wrote my story in my native language before I had it translated by Deepl and corrected with my knowledge.
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Posted by rugli 3 years ago Report
Not bad story, allough I must admit I was confused in some places what was going on. But its understandable since you are not native in English.
It could be good idea to find someone to proof read :)
Posted by Hetzering 3 years ago Report
Yeah, I know that even when I proofread, I let mistakes slip through (like "Diana began to remove her seat belt." when it was only her pants belt) and most of all, my apprehension when I use expressions : does the expression exist in English ? And if so, does it mean the same thing in English ?
But you're right, I'll try to find someone to proofread me.
Posted by rugli 3 years ago Report
Not bad story, allough I must admit I was confused in some places what was going on. But its understandable since you are not native in English.
It could be good idea to find someone to proof read :)
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
Great story , I’m not a huge fan of parents or siblings as preds because i don’t see the appeal. Abut that’s mostly when it’s A POV story where the reader is the prey. The other reason is when parents are preds it’s weird if they try to portray themselves as good parents. Since they just killed their kid.
This story is great because Diana is a decent parent, her daughter is just a massive gut slut. So she granted her wish. The as well as the ending was sweet rather than cruel. As it’s kinda unfair to eat a kid just because they don’t do well In School or in this case. The kids entire family is dead. At least in this one the teacher decides to adopt rather than snuff out a kid who got screwed
Posted by bronzelara 3 years ago Report
Hot story. Id never graduate highschool though Im too much a gutslut myself
Posted by BloodPuma 3 years ago Report
Very nice and hot!!! Though I'd love to see the loli get gulped and enjoy it, it's still a great story!!
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
I really enjoyed this one too, incest vore is a personal favorite of mine.
I thought the friendship between Victoria and Diana was good too, including them sending post meal pics to each other.
Like the the rest, I did notice the grammar and stuff, though I have seen far worse :).
If you like, I wouldn't mind doing some proofreading for you. A thing like a language barrier shouldn't get in the way of good stories.
Just send me a PM if you're interested.
Posted by JauneCinderEmerald 2 years ago Report
I love naughty stories like this
Posted by Bomberboy18 1 year ago Report
Great story! Also, I’m guessing the young girl from earlier that the muscular guy ate got digested, even if she was willing.
Posted by Bomberboy18 1 year ago Report
Wait did she though, or is there a chance that he later spat her out, sorry I’m just a little curious.
Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report
She's been fully digested! All my vore is a one-way trip!
Posted by Bomberboy18 1 year ago Report
Oh okay, then there’s no doubt big guy grew bulky after churning her up too.